2015年11月7日雅思大作文写作范文
A卷大作文题目： School leavers go travelling or work before they go directly to university. Are there more advantages or disadvantage on their study?
A卷范文主体思路分析：
主体段一：选择旅行和工作可以帮助他们更好的发掘自己的兴趣，决定未来的专业方向
主体段二：选择旅行和工作的的缺点是工作任务很难接手，而且不连续学习容易分散精力，对以后的学习不好
范文：
Before the beginning of university, students who wish to continue with their education face two probable choices – either suspend their study for a year to obtain work and travel experience, or go directly into university. I will analyze the pros and cons of these two choices below.
A year’s time to work or travel before university has been popular among young people in recent years. In fact, students can obtain several good points by doing this. To begin with, students can enhance their life skills and maintain a balance between their studies and work from the one year experience. They will become more independent during this meaningful process. Also, they can indentify career preference and areas of interests during travelling, which will help them to decide their major in university.
However, one year’s work or travel also has its obvious disadvantages. Coming fresh out of high school, students do not have a clear understanding of the harsh realities of the world. They are not in a strong position to undertake early employment. Besides, young people are not able to make a correct career decision. Choosing a career requires sufficient knowledge of one’s own strengths, aptitudes and the trends in job market. Most young adults lack such knowledge. Moreover, travelling and working will divert young people’s attention from their previous objectives. If students give up the opportunity of being educated and pursue other ventures, they will lose their willpower to learn something carefully and patiently. The side effect of disengagement from schooling might not be significant in the first several years, but it will surly disadvantages them a lot in a long run.
To conclude, work or travel before university has its advantages and disadvantage. In fact, the disadvantages outweigh advantages.
B卷大作文题目 ： For schoolchildren, their teachers have more influence on their intelligence and social development than their parents. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
B卷观点分析(提纲)：
若支持老师影响大的理由
智力：学生在学校接受知识主要受到老师影响; mainly gain knowledge from their teachers
社会发展方面：好的老师能够提供好的社会资源，有助于学生在学术和职业道路上的发展;social resources, pave the way for students’ future career path
若支持父母影响大的理由
智力：基因决定力，智商由父母给的天赋决定;mainly depend on genes from parents
社会发展方面：从小耳濡目染，熟悉父母的职业圈子和工作方式更容易上手和成功;influenced by parents’ occupation, familiar with, easier to get involve in and obtain success
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