Question

帮忙看看这几句英语对不对。

这是我作文里的几句，不敢确定对不对，请高手帮忙看看有没有什么语法错误，若有，清指出并作讲解，谢谢。
1。It is more interesting that seeing the film .And the film may make things simply to understang.(这句的问题就是that后面只加名词可以吗；和后半句中make的用法对不对)
2。Theoriginal work is picked out through time goes by.
3.I am a boy of 16 years old.

Answer 1

1.不能用that， and 是连词，不能作为一句话的开头， make 后加不带to的不定式，所以应该是：
It is more interesting to see the film, and the film may make things simly understand.
2. 应该用as, 不能用through, 把as time goes by当短语就行了
3. 可以是 I am a 16-year-old boy.

Answer 2

that 在这里是连词，后面不可以加名词的。
make 后面加省略to的不定式，也就是跟动词原形。 所以 And the film may make things simply understand

through改成as
去掉 old.