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摘要：使用2010年5月5日至7日常规天气图资料、有关物理量资料，采取天气诊断分析方法。结果表明：这次过程是发生在持续的冷暖空气交汇于暴雨落区的环流背景下，地面静止锋维持、850hPa上持续有低涡沿切变线东移、有低空急流配合、500hPa上多小槽东移、天气尺度系统呈前倾槽配置；在物理量场上，有充分的水汽供应配合强烈的辐合。
关键词：暴雨；冷锋；切变线；低涡；低空急流；前倾槽；水汽场
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Answer 1

摘要：Abstract:
使用2010年5月5日至7日常规天气图资料、有关物理量资料，采取天气诊断分析方法。
This paper adopts the climate diagnostics analysis method on the weather chart data during 5th to 7th May 2010，as well as the relevant physical quantity data.

结果表明：这次过程是发生在持续的冷暖空气交汇于暴雨落区的环流背景下，地面静止锋维持、850hPa上持续有低涡沿切变线东移、有低空急流配合、500hPa上多小槽东移、天气尺度系统呈前倾槽配置；在物理量场上，有充分的水汽供应配合强烈的辐合。
The result shows that the course of this event happened when sustained convergence of cold and warm air at the circulation background of torrential rain region, stationary front on the surface, there’s a continuous low pressure vortex moving eastward along the shear line at 850hPa level,coordinated by a low altitude jet flow, more trough moving eastward at 500hPa level, the synoptic scale weather system appears forward tilting trough configuration; and on the physical quantity field, the strong convergence is supported by a sufficient supply of water vapor.

关键词：暴雨；冷锋；切变线；低涡；低空急流；前倾槽；水汽场
Key words: Torrential rain; cold front; shear line; low pressure vortex; low altitude jet flow; forward tilting trough; water vapor field.

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Answer 2

Abstract: using 2010 May 5-7 routine of weather information, relevant parameters, adopt weather data analysis method. Results show that: the process of continuous changes are occurring in the rain falls in air circulation background, the ground 850hPa maintain, feng still continues to have vortex, along the shear line after the low-level jet 500hPa, more small groove moved eastwardly, weather scale system is leaning slot configurations. In court, the sufficient quantities of water supply with strong convergence.
Keywords: rain, Cold, Shear line, Vortex, The low-level jet, Leaning trough, Water vapour field