Question

帮助英语短文改错，有三篇

一、
Before he was a teacher,Bob told me whet he
would like to be a lawyer when he was at school.
Heworked very hard at his lessons and tried
enter into a famous university,but something
unhappy happened in his family,that made it
necessary for him to working for a living.
As ayoung man,he had been a bus driver,a salesman.
But he spends his spare time studying
and finally became college teacher."Young
people,"he often said,"full of wishes and
hopes after they step into the society."
二、
May I have attention,please?I have a few
things to tell you.When you have a class here in the
language lab,please be here a little early.Change
your shoes enter the lab.Dnn't bring angthing
here except your textbooks.When you are into,
please don't touch these machine without permission.
Always do as the teacher tell you yo.In class you
should only speak the English,not Chinese,Recorders
can be used make a copy of the listening materials.
When classover,turn off your machines and leave
the lab one by one.
三、
A farmer goes to the nest of his goose and find there
an egg all yellow and bright.When he takes it up,
it is heavy and he is going to throw it about,
because he thinks it trick to him.But he takes it home
at last,and soon finds that it is an egg of golden.
Every morning same thing happens,and he soon
becomers rich because he sells his eggs.Ashe grew
rich he grows greedy,and thinks to get all at once all the
gold in the geese body.So he kills it and opens it only
to find everything inside.
一行有一个地方错..或者是对的..谁帮帮忙谢谢了！
一楼说的那个..是不小心打错的不好意思..

Answer 1

一、
Before he was a teacher, Bob told me what(改为that或者去掉what) he
would like to be a lawyer when he was at school.(本行没有错误)
He worked very hard at his lessons and tried(此处加to)
enter into(去掉into) a famous university, but something
unhappy happened in his family, that(改为which) made it
necessary for him to working(改为work) for a living.
As a young man, he had been a bus driver, a salesman. （本行也没有错误）
But he spends(改为spent) his spare time studying
and finally became(此处加a) college teacher. "Young
people," he often said, "(此处加are)full of wishes and
hopes after they step into the society."
二、
May I have（此处加your） attention, please? I have a few
things to tell you. When you have a class here in the (此行没有错误)
language lab, please be here a little early(改为earlier). Change
your shoes(加and) enter the lab. Don’t bring anything
here except your textbooks. When you are into(改为in),
please don't touch these machine(改为machines) without permission.
Always do as the teacher tell(改为tells) you to. In class you
should only speak the(去掉the) English, not Chinese, Recorders
can be used(此处加to) make a copy of the listening materials.
When class(此处加is) over, turn off your machines and leave
the lab one by one.
三、
A farmer goes to the nest of his goose and find there(此处加is)
an egg all yellow and bright. When he takes it up, (此行无错误)
it is heavy and he is going to throw it about(改为away),
because he thinks it (此处加a)trick to him. But he takes it home
at last, and soon finds that it is an egg of golden(改为gold).
Every morning (此处加the)same thing happens, and he soon
becomes rich because he sells his eggs. As he grew(改为grows)
rich, he grows greedy, and thinks to get (to get应改为of getting)all at once all the
gold in the geese(改为goose’s) body. So he kills it and opens it only
to find everything(改为nothing) inside.

应该是没问题的，我做改错题还是很有把握的哦。祝您学业进步！

Answer 2

一，第一行whet改成what
二，第四行Dnn't改成Don't
三，第七行becomers改成becomes