Question

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one day a man finds a cocoon of a butterfly.a small opening appeared,through that it struggled to move its body.but it made no progresses.
he took a pair of scissors and cut the remained cocoon opened. the butterfly then moved easily.and the butterfly could only crawl around with a weak body and small,soft wings.in fact,which it was never able to fly.
what the man didn`t understand that the struggle was required by the butterfly.it had to get throough the tiny opening by themselves,so that it would be ready to flight once it achieved its freedom from the cocoon.sometimes struggles are exact what we need in our life.

Answer 1

1. one day a man finds a cocoon of a butterfly。 finds改为found,文章通篇为过去时态，所以这里要改成一般过去式。

2. 2.a small opening appeared,through that it struggled to move its body
   ， that改成which, 后面半句是从句，这里要用which来引导
   

3. but it made no progresses。 progress是不可数名称，所以progresses改成progress。

4. he took a pair of scissors and cut the remained cocoon opened。opened 改成open,这里要用形容词。比如cut the hair short

5. the butterfly then moved easily.and the butterfly could only crawl around with a weak body and small,soft wings    第一个and 改成but, 句意在这里是一个转折。

6. .in fact,which it was never able to fly. 去掉which 

7. what the man didn`t understand that the struggle was required by the butterfly。这句是主语从句，但是没有谓语，that 前面加is

8. it had to get throough the tiny opening by themselves, themselves 改成itself,单复数不一致。

9. sometimes struggles are exact what we need in our life. exact 改成exactly 。还有一个找不到了。。。
   

Answer 2

find改成found，remained改为remaining， opened改为open，把which删掉，understand和that中间加was,并且把后面那个was去掉，throough改为through，themselves改为itself , flight改为fly，exact改为exactly