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1.春节快要到了,你在美国的一位朋友Mike想了解你今年的春节计划,请写一封回信给他,告诉他你打算怎样过春节(80词左右,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数)开头:DearM...
1.春节快要到了,你在美国的一位朋友Mike想了解你今年的春节计划,请写一封回信给他,告诉他你打算怎样过春节(80词左右,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数)
开头:Dear Mike,
Last time you asked me what I am going to do during the Spring Festival. Now I would like to tell you sth about my plan.(文章开始)The family members get together to celebrate the festival on the day before the first day of a new year in lunar calendar. We enjoy delicious food and watch the special show for the festival on TV. I usually set off firecrackers with my cousins when our parents are watching TV. We believe that it may get rid of bad things. For children, the most important part of the Festival is getting lucky money. We bow to the older people and wish them a happy New Year and they will give us lucky money in red envelopes.
(结尾)Please send my best wishes to your family!
Yours, Tom
2.上星期,学校就学生的作业量问题要求各班召开家长会进行讨论.以下是你班家长的观点:多数家长认为作业多有好处,而部分家长则认为作业过多对孩子的成长不利.请你根据下面的提示,用英语作一简要介绍并表明你自己的观点.
Most parents A few parents
1)review what students have learned take a lot of time
2)develop students’ minds cannot have a good rest
3)stop students playing computer games cannot do the things students like
可适当增加细节,要求意思连贯,语句通顺.词数80左右;短文的开头已给出(不计入总词数)
开头:Last week our class had a parents’ meeting. At the meeting, all the parents talked about whether doing a lot of homework was useful or not. Many parents thought that doing much homework was useful.
(我的观点开始)In my opinion, students in our ages shouldn’t be given too much homework, we don’t want a life full of homework. If there is so much homework that we cannot finish, some students will be afraid of the homework, even try to stop doing it. That’s very terrible. We need time to have some sports and read some books, not homework any time. But no homework is also horrible. Too much free time will make students don’t know what to do. So I hope teachers can give us the best and least exercises to review what we have learned and improve the knowledge. 展开
开头:Dear Mike,
Last time you asked me what I am going to do during the Spring Festival. Now I would like to tell you sth about my plan.(文章开始)The family members get together to celebrate the festival on the day before the first day of a new year in lunar calendar. We enjoy delicious food and watch the special show for the festival on TV. I usually set off firecrackers with my cousins when our parents are watching TV. We believe that it may get rid of bad things. For children, the most important part of the Festival is getting lucky money. We bow to the older people and wish them a happy New Year and they will give us lucky money in red envelopes.
(结尾)Please send my best wishes to your family!
Yours, Tom
2.上星期,学校就学生的作业量问题要求各班召开家长会进行讨论.以下是你班家长的观点:多数家长认为作业多有好处,而部分家长则认为作业过多对孩子的成长不利.请你根据下面的提示,用英语作一简要介绍并表明你自己的观点.
Most parents A few parents
1)review what students have learned take a lot of time
2)develop students’ minds cannot have a good rest
3)stop students playing computer games cannot do the things students like
可适当增加细节,要求意思连贯,语句通顺.词数80左右;短文的开头已给出(不计入总词数)
开头:Last week our class had a parents’ meeting. At the meeting, all the parents talked about whether doing a lot of homework was useful or not. Many parents thought that doing much homework was useful.
(我的观点开始)In my opinion, students in our ages shouldn’t be given too much homework, we don’t want a life full of homework. If there is so much homework that we cannot finish, some students will be afraid of the homework, even try to stop doing it. That’s very terrible. We need time to have some sports and read some books, not homework any time. But no homework is also horrible. Too much free time will make students don’t know what to do. So I hope teachers can give us the best and least exercises to review what we have learned and improve the knowledge. 展开
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第一篇文章：春节计划：This is my festival plan.the first day,we will celebrate with my family together. We will enjoy the delicious food and watch the TV. I also can play the firecracker with my cousins. We believe that it may get rid of bad things.For the children,they like money,because it is lucky money. We will bow to the older people and wish them happy in the New Year.This is our Chinese spring festival.
第二篇文章：怎样学才是效果最好的。Our class had a parents’ meeting at the last week.At the meeting time,the parents talked about too much homework is good or not. Many parents thought that doing too much homework was useful. In my opinion,I don’t think do the too much homework is useful to a student,sometimes we need have a rest,not just do the homework.If have too much homework,we couldn’t finish it. Some students will be afraid of do the homework,even never do it again. That’s so terrible.We need time do our own things,just like read books,do some sports and so on.But if not homework,I think that it’s also no good.Because we nothing to do it.So I think do the teacher should teach us how to study,how to review,not just for the exam.
第二篇文章：怎样学才是效果最好的。Our class had a parents’ meeting at the last week.At the meeting time,the parents talked about too much homework is good or not. Many parents thought that doing too much homework was useful. In my opinion,I don’t think do the too much homework is useful to a student,sometimes we need have a rest,not just do the homework.If have too much homework,we couldn’t finish it. Some students will be afraid of do the homework,even never do it again. That’s so terrible.We need time do our own things,just like read books,do some sports and so on.But if not homework,I think that it’s also no good.Because we nothing to do it.So I think do the teacher should teach us how to study,how to review,not just for the exam.
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Spring has come. Quietly
Excessive of fireworks and firecrackers, sound loud scream and a Spring Festival. Since the spring of happy laughter, agitate red lanterns reflecting a little warm, warm air very warm and atmosphere. Please god, choose and buy, buy firecracker couplet many... An enormous hurry, people feel fragrant and busy days, time also in this grand festival emits precipitation has long fragrance. Table, with deep to compose and blessing. Relatives are mutually dependent and exchanging happiness, appreciate the warmth, the soul of the deepest wrinkles in the sink to tender stretch of the moment. Happy feeling so dribs and penetrated the heart of people.
In the winter of languid in the firecracker were receding. In the heat of joy, auspicious tinged, spring to quietly. The millennium, spring light gentle cycle still have not hidden beauty. Warm, sunny and not hot rather than evil, tolerance and don't cross. Her smile, with generous have explained everything, all XiePao and callosity of expectation and yearning. This is a vibrant season, all hopes in here. The breeze blows softly, snow blew off mist. Spring song across the world, sing obstacle fold of green grass, near the woods and courtyard lichen, Sing to the south wild geese fly, Singing woke up the frog... Sing a colorful world.
In the spring, grasses, not only have we dream, In the spring, the growth of HeMiao not only, also including our comprehension. Let us huaichuai the sun moved to a hug spring, the spring, full of news into the heart of blessing into, in the spring sowing sweat in autumn, the infiltration faith to reap the clusters of hope!
Spring is coming, it's really beautiful! This is a land rejuvenation, rebirth. Like snakes, bears, the frog... Cold-blooded animals have stopped hibernate, climbed ground appreciated. Small bird spring, spring grass sprout thousand flowers bloom, and the swallow a nest fly back to earth, spring back to full atmosphere.
Even ChunLei continuous rain, all for us to make a spring sowing. Spring is a good season, the farmer uncle is a good season for planting, begin to have good harvest in autumn.
It is not like spring, summer, autumn, unlike dry hot as cold in winter, like so cold. And spring is a vibrant, dynamic spring. It reminds me of our mother, mother earth, like mother gave birth to us, and we will have life, the young, is starting all over again, all life again.
People can like spring, because this beautiful spring, give a person with a new start, new harvest, a new life, a new hope.
With the advent of spring, the earth is completely afforest, from the meter to mind are transformed, the spring is green.
This spring, give a person with a new life, give a person with new hope. I love this beautiful spring.
春天悄悄来了
流光溢彩的烟花，清脆响亮的鞭炮，昭示着又一个春节的到来。早春的风雪激荡起开心的欢笑，大红灯笼映现出点点暖意，空气中迷漫着温馨而热烈的气息。请财神、选对联、买鞭炮、购年货……行色匆匆中，人们感受到了日子的芳香与忙碌，时间也在这盛大的节日里散发出沉淀已久的醇香。餐桌沉沉，谱写着深深的期盼与祝福。亲人们相互依靠，互赠快乐，静静体味着家的温馨，灵魂的皱纹在这最深最沉的时刻得以温柔的伸展。幸福的感觉就这样点点滴滴地渗透到了人们的心里。
慵懒的冬季在震天的爆竹声中渐渐远去。在欢乐的热浪里，在吉祥的祝福声中，春天悄然而至。千年的循环依旧，春天淡淡的温柔里有着无法隐藏的美丽。温暖而不炙热，明媚而不妖邪，宽容而不凌厉。她用坦然宽厚的笑容，解释所有的老茧和血泡，解释所有的期待和向往。这是一个充满朝气的季节，所有的希望都在这里萌芽。春风柔柔地吹化了冰雪，吹散了薄雾。春天的歌声穿过叠障的尘世，唱绿了石缝中的小草、江边的树林和庭院的青苔；唱来了南飞的大雁；唱醒了沉睡中的青蛙……唱出了一个多彩多姿的世界。
在春天里，拔节的不只是小草，也有我们的梦想；在春天里，成长的不只是禾苗，也包括我们的感悟。就让我们怀揣着一份阳光的感动来拥抱春天，把春的消息化作满腔憧憬，把心的祝福化作满怀豪情，在春天播种下汗水浸润的信念，在秋天去收获果实累累的希望！
春天到了,真美呀!这是一个大地回春,万物复苏的季节.像蛇,熊,青蛙……之类的冷血动物都停止了冬眠,爬上地面欣赏春天.小鸟鸣春,百花争艳,小草发芽,燕子也飞回来搭窝了,春天使给大地恢复了万紫千红的气氛.
连春雨,春雷都连绵不断地来为我们报春.春天正是播种的好季节,农民伯伯正趁着这个好季节开始播种了,到了秋天就有好的收成.
春天,它不像夏天那样干枯炎热,不像秋天那样冷清,也不像冬天那样寒冷.而春天是一个生气勃勃,充满活力的春天.这使我想到了我们的母亲,母亲就像大地,母亲生下我们,我们就有了生命,大地回春了,就等于一切都要重新开始了,所有的生命都重新来过.
人们可喜欢春天了,因为这美丽的春天,给人以新的开始,新的收获,新的生命,新的希望.
随着春天的到来,大地完全被绿化了,从仪表到心灵都焕然一新,整个春天都被绿色覆盖了.
这春天,既给人以新的生命,也给人以新的希望.我爱这美丽的春天.
Excessive of fireworks and firecrackers, sound loud scream and a Spring Festival. Since the spring of happy laughter, agitate red lanterns reflecting a little warm, warm air very warm and atmosphere. Please god, choose and buy, buy firecracker couplet many... An enormous hurry, people feel fragrant and busy days, time also in this grand festival emits precipitation has long fragrance. Table, with deep to compose and blessing. Relatives are mutually dependent and exchanging happiness, appreciate the warmth, the soul of the deepest wrinkles in the sink to tender stretch of the moment. Happy feeling so dribs and penetrated the heart of people.
In the winter of languid in the firecracker were receding. In the heat of joy, auspicious tinged, spring to quietly. The millennium, spring light gentle cycle still have not hidden beauty. Warm, sunny and not hot rather than evil, tolerance and don't cross. Her smile, with generous have explained everything, all XiePao and callosity of expectation and yearning. This is a vibrant season, all hopes in here. The breeze blows softly, snow blew off mist. Spring song across the world, sing obstacle fold of green grass, near the woods and courtyard lichen, Sing to the south wild geese fly, Singing woke up the frog... Sing a colorful world.
In the spring, grasses, not only have we dream, In the spring, the growth of HeMiao not only, also including our comprehension. Let us huaichuai the sun moved to a hug spring, the spring, full of news into the heart of blessing into, in the spring sowing sweat in autumn, the infiltration faith to reap the clusters of hope!
Spring is coming, it's really beautiful! This is a land rejuvenation, rebirth. Like snakes, bears, the frog... Cold-blooded animals have stopped hibernate, climbed ground appreciated. Small bird spring, spring grass sprout thousand flowers bloom, and the swallow a nest fly back to earth, spring back to full atmosphere.
Even ChunLei continuous rain, all for us to make a spring sowing. Spring is a good season, the farmer uncle is a good season for planting, begin to have good harvest in autumn.
It is not like spring, summer, autumn, unlike dry hot as cold in winter, like so cold. And spring is a vibrant, dynamic spring. It reminds me of our mother, mother earth, like mother gave birth to us, and we will have life, the young, is starting all over again, all life again.
People can like spring, because this beautiful spring, give a person with a new start, new harvest, a new life, a new hope.
With the advent of spring, the earth is completely afforest, from the meter to mind are transformed, the spring is green.
This spring, give a person with a new life, give a person with new hope. I love this beautiful spring.
春天悄悄来了
流光溢彩的烟花，清脆响亮的鞭炮，昭示着又一个春节的到来。早春的风雪激荡起开心的欢笑，大红灯笼映现出点点暖意，空气中迷漫着温馨而热烈的气息。请财神、选对联、买鞭炮、购年货……行色匆匆中，人们感受到了日子的芳香与忙碌，时间也在这盛大的节日里散发出沉淀已久的醇香。餐桌沉沉，谱写着深深的期盼与祝福。亲人们相互依靠，互赠快乐，静静体味着家的温馨，灵魂的皱纹在这最深最沉的时刻得以温柔的伸展。幸福的感觉就这样点点滴滴地渗透到了人们的心里。
慵懒的冬季在震天的爆竹声中渐渐远去。在欢乐的热浪里，在吉祥的祝福声中，春天悄然而至。千年的循环依旧，春天淡淡的温柔里有着无法隐藏的美丽。温暖而不炙热，明媚而不妖邪，宽容而不凌厉。她用坦然宽厚的笑容，解释所有的老茧和血泡，解释所有的期待和向往。这是一个充满朝气的季节，所有的希望都在这里萌芽。春风柔柔地吹化了冰雪，吹散了薄雾。春天的歌声穿过叠障的尘世，唱绿了石缝中的小草、江边的树林和庭院的青苔；唱来了南飞的大雁；唱醒了沉睡中的青蛙……唱出了一个多彩多姿的世界。
在春天里，拔节的不只是小草，也有我们的梦想；在春天里，成长的不只是禾苗，也包括我们的感悟。就让我们怀揣着一份阳光的感动来拥抱春天，把春的消息化作满腔憧憬，把心的祝福化作满怀豪情，在春天播种下汗水浸润的信念，在秋天去收获果实累累的希望！
春天到了,真美呀!这是一个大地回春,万物复苏的季节.像蛇,熊,青蛙……之类的冷血动物都停止了冬眠,爬上地面欣赏春天.小鸟鸣春,百花争艳,小草发芽,燕子也飞回来搭窝了,春天使给大地恢复了万紫千红的气氛.
连春雨,春雷都连绵不断地来为我们报春.春天正是播种的好季节,农民伯伯正趁着这个好季节开始播种了,到了秋天就有好的收成.
春天,它不像夏天那样干枯炎热,不像秋天那样冷清,也不像冬天那样寒冷.而春天是一个生气勃勃,充满活力的春天.这使我想到了我们的母亲,母亲就像大地,母亲生下我们,我们就有了生命,大地回春了,就等于一切都要重新开始了,所有的生命都重新来过.
人们可喜欢春天了,因为这美丽的春天,给人以新的开始,新的收获,新的生命,新的希望.
随着春天的到来,大地完全被绿化了,从仪表到心灵都焕然一新,整个春天都被绿色覆盖了.
这春天,既给人以新的生命,也给人以新的希望.我爱这美丽的春天.
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