Question

帮忙改正一下整篇英语短文的错误、

Women are taking a much more important part in society today.
Now women are working like teacher，scientists and even leaders.
Almost all jobs that were used to be done by men are done perfectly
well by women.Women are no longer looking down upon in
society.As the changes in their social role,women's position in
the family have been improved as well.It's hard to find the wife is
busy though the husband is sitting in an armchair ,watching TV.In
spite of all these changes,a great number of men still guard his rights.
They think of women as incapable creatures.Sometimes few women
are allowed attend important meetings.This is the problem we should
try to solve now.
这篇短文每一行都有一个错误，希望大家能够帮帮我、谢谢了！

Answer 1

1. taking→playing。
play a…part in 是固定搭配，意为“对……起作用”。

2. like→as。
表示身份常常用 as。

3. 去掉were。
used to do意为“过去常常……”。

4. looking→looked。
be looked down upon意为“被人轻视”。

5. As→With。
“with + 名词 + 介词短语”为独立主格结构作伴随状语。

6. have→has。
主语 position 为不可数名词。

7. though→while。
两句之间不是让步关系而是对比关系。

8. his→their。
指代主语 men，故用代词 their。

9. √。

10. allow 后加 to。
allow sb to do sth 为固定短语。

Answer 2

taking playing
teacher teachers
that which
looking looked
changes change
the a
though while
guard guards
think of think
attend to attend

Answer 3

第一行：taking改成playing
第二行：teacher改成teachers
第三行：去掉were
第四行：looking改成looked
第五行：position改成positions
第六行：去掉is
第七行：though改成while
第八行：his改成their
第九行：√
第十行：allowed与attend中间加to

Answer 4

Women are taking a much more important part in society today.
Now women are working like teacher，scientists and even leaders. teacher---teachers
Almost all jobs that were used to be done by men are done perfectly
were 删除
well by women.Women are no longer looking down upon in
looking----looked
society.As the changes in their social role,women's position in
position---positions
the family have been improved as well.It's hard to find (that)the wife is
busy though the husband is sitting in an armchair ,watching TV.In
though---while
spite of all these changes,a great number of men still guard his rights.his ---their
They think of women as incapable creatures.Sometimes few women
are allowed(加to) attend important meetings.This is the problem we should
try to solve now.