Question

急需英语高手帮忙

帮我检查一下这量两篇英语口语作文有没有什么错误:
Reading book is my one of favourite hobby.They make me know a lot of thing in the world.Sometimes reading book make me feel happy.But some sad story make me cry.I like reading book with animals.I often buy many book in the bookshop and reading book in the library.

Last Sunday,my parents and I was going to zhe park.We played very happy .And then,my parents felt tired and sat under the tree.And Iplay the hoolahoop.Suddenly,I saw a policeman wanted to catch a thief,he fell down and the policeman took he away .Before the policeman left,he said to me"You are a brave child!"
第二篇第三行漏了一句，从这里开始“Suddenly ,I saw a policeman wanted to catch a thief ,and the thief ran to me,I hadn't time to think ,throwghed the hoolahoop at the thief,he fell down ........

Answer 1

第一篇:Reading book is one of my favourite hobbies.They make me know a lot of things in the world.Sometimes reading book make me feel happy,but some sad stories make me cry.I like reading book with animals.I often buy many books in the bookshop and reading them in the library.

第二篇:Last Sunday,my parents and I went to the park.We played very happy .And then,my parents felt tired and sat under the tree.And I played the hoolahoop.Suddenly ,I saw a policeman wanted to catch a thief ,and the thief ran to me,I hadn't time to think ,and throwghed the hoolahoop at the thief,then he fell down and the policeman took he away .Before the policeman left,he said to me"You are a brave child!"

Answer 2

给你改了改，自己对照一下吧。第二段的那句话加上了

Reading is my one of favourite hobbies. Books helps me to know a lot of things in the world. Sometimes reading books makes me feel happy, but some sad stories make me cry.I like reading books with animals.I often buy many books from the bookstore and read books in the library.

Last Sunday,my parents and I went to zhe park.We had a good time.Later, my parents felt tired and sat under a tree.And I played with the hoolahoop.Suddenly,I saw a policeman trying to catch a thief. and the thief ran to me. I had no time to think ,threw the hoolahoop at the thief. He fell down and the policeman took him away .Before the policeman left,he said to me"You are a brave child!"

Answer 3

第一行thing和第二行STORYHE和第三行BOOK要加”S”
第三行”WITH”改为”ABOUT”
第四行READING用原形
第五行WAS GOING TO 改为WENT要用一般过去式
第六行SAT 后加DOWN

Answer 4

Reading book is one of my favourite hobby.They make me know a lot of things in the world.Sometimes reading book makes me feel happy.But some sad stories make me cry.I like reading book about animals.I often buy many books in the bookshop and read book in the library.
Last Sunday,my parents and I was going to the park.We played very happy .And then,my parents felt tired and sat under the tree.And I played the hoolahoop.Suddenly,I saw a policeman want to catch a thief,he fell down and the policeman took he away .Before the policeman left,he said to me"You are a brave child!"

顺便冒犯地问一句,这好象是用作初二的测试试卷上的改错题啊.....该同学是另劈新径对付老师吗??...

Answer 5

Reading book is one of my favourite hobbies.They make me know a lot about the world.Sometimes reading books make me happy.But some sad stories make me cry.I like reading book with animals.I often buy many books in the bookshop and reading them in the library.

Last Sunday,my parents and I went to zhe park.We enjoyed it very much.And then,my parents felt tired and sat under the tree.And I play the hoolahoop(这是什么?).Suddenly,I saw a policeman want to catch a thief,he fell down and the policeman took him away .Before the policeman left,he said to me"You are a brave child!"

Answer 6

Reading book is one of my favourite hobbies,from which I know the world a lot.I always feel happy or sad from reading the book .I choose to read the book on animals a lot.Sometimes ,I read books either from library or from the bookshop.