Question

一道英语改错题谢谢

短文改错 Dear Ms Smiths, I appreciate your help very well.On the first day of 63____camp,you can came up to myself while I was sitting alone. After 64____that ,you always gave me specially attention and inspired 65____to me to join in activies.As a result,I gradually got to know66____ the other campers.Because yhe help you gave me that summer,67____my life changed.I gained so much confidence I go back 68____to school as new person.My grades improved .I became 69____very active but made new friends.Today,I got a letter that 70____ said I had been admitting to a college.I am proud of it.I just 71____want to thank you for helping me becoming a different person.72____ Yours, Bob

Answer 1

63.well--much
(非常感谢very
much)
64.myself--me
(帮助某人came
to
help
sb.
不必用反身代词)
65.special
(形容词做定语修饰attention)
66.去掉inspired后面的to
(inspired
sb.)
67.because后面加of
(because是连词,一般引导状语从句.because
of+名词)
68.正确(这句话可能是漏打单词上去了,前后不连贯)
69.as后加a
(a
new
person
单数)
70.but--and
(并列成分,并没有转折的意思)
71.admitting--admitted
(被动I
had
been
admitting
to
a
college.被允许进入大学,即被录取的意思)
72.become