Question

英语语法翻译

I am trying to forget her,to forget
that I love her..
but whether I hear her name or touch something that reminds me of her,I can't help thinking about her.
Getting over she would take a lifetime

有什么地方语法不对需要修改

Answer 1

I'm trying to forget her and to forger that I love her, but WHEN I hear her name or touch something that reminds me of her, I can't help thinking about her. Getting over HER would take a lifetime.

没什么大问题。主要改了两处。whether改成when.whether基本等于if,是否的意思，这里用when当。。。的时候比较贴切。。。she改成了her...主格形式明显不对。

Answer 2

I am trying to forget her, forget that i love her.
But when i hear her name [and] touch something [about her],i cant help [thinking of] her.
Getting over her would take a lifetime.

and touch something about her,这是肯定句，用and比较恰当。about her相对来说简单明了。你所用的think about是 考虑 的意思，think of才是想起。

Answer 3

I am trying to forget her and that I love her，but, I can't keep thinking about her when I hear her name or touch something that reminds me of her, because of getting over her would take me a lifetime.这样整体性和逻辑性都要好一些，切记汉译英要用英语的思维方式，比如"要花一生的时间"逻辑上是"我"所以要加上"me"，这样更自然。

Answer 4

终极版本来啦！
I'm trying to forget her, to forget that I've loved her. But, when I hear her name or touch anything that made me remind her, I can't help thinking of her.
To get over her will take me a lifetime.
在保留你的意思的基础上进行调整。。。

Answer 5

I am trying to forget how I used to love her. But whenever I hear her name or feel her touch, it reminds me everything about her, I can't but to think of her.

Getting over her will take a lifetime

这样写会顺很多 看和读整个词句也好点 至少我会这样写