Question

英语短文在线改错，急！

Dear Alice,
I have just got some good news to tell to you .I win a national prize for painting last week.My farher was so pleasing that he suggested I go to England for a holiday.I`d like to stying there for helf a month,visiting place of interest or practicing my English as welll.We`ve been writing to each for nearly a year now.I have often dreamed of talk face to face with you I imagine you`ll be at vacation yourself by that time.Perhaps we could go out to do some sightseeing together.
Best,
Lily

Answer 1

第一行：tell to you中的to去掉
第二行：pleasing改为pleased
第三行：stying改为stay
第四行：talk改为talking
第五行：by改成at
第六行：把do去掉

Answer 2

Dear Alice,
I had just got some good news to tell you .I win a national prize for painting last week.My farher was so pleasing that he suggested I go to England for a holiday.I`d like to stying there for helf a month,visiting place of interest or practicing my English as welll.We`ve been writing to each for nearly a year now.I have often dreamed of talk face to face with you I imagine you`ll be at vacation yourself by that time.Perhaps we could go out to do some sightseeing together.
Best,