Question

请各位帮我翻译compare...with的一个句子

RT
中文是：与传统商务酒店相比，它有更好的环境和更低的价格。而相对于更小型的度假山庄，它又能提供更好的服务。
前一句我的翻译是：Compare with the traditional business hotel, it has a better natural environment and lower prices.
而第二句的开头我不想又compare一次，大家有什么更好的建议，或者整句有什么更好的翻译？
Thx~~

Answer 1

首先你前一句的语法错了。应该是
Compared with traditional business hotels, it has better environments and lower prices.

第二句是
But in contrast to smaller resorts, it provides better services.

Answer 2

与传统商务酒店相比，它有更好的环境和更低的价格。而相对于更小型的度假山庄，它又能提供更好的服务。

合起来简单点说得了~不用按中文的语句译吧？

It has preferable environment, much lower price and better services when compare with traditional business hotel and small resort.

写文章越简单越好，没必要按中文翻译。意思一样就可以。都是在说，前面的比后面两个类型的酒店有优势。把优势提出来，就得了。顺便提一下两个类型的酒店。

Answer 3

第一句中的traditional最好改成conventional,traditional是指传统文化，而conventional是指比较常规的。compare也应改为comparing to，一个句子里只能有一个动词。
comparing with conventional business hotels,it has better scenery and lower prices.Moreover,it can provide better quality service than smaller resorts.

Answer 4

标准答案：
Compared with the traditional business hotel（它是被拿来和传统酒店相比，所以用comparedwith), it has a better natural environment with a cheaper price.And it can serve you better than the small resorts.

很久没看英语了，但我相信我的语感！！！楼主看看吧

Answer 5

首先，要指出的问题是前一句中不能用compare，而要用compared.
其次, 第二句话可以用in contrast to, 这样翻译：and in contrast to smaller holiday villas, it can provide better service.