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书面表达：假设你是某校高三学生李华，国庆期间你去黄山旅游了，美丽的黄山让你流连忘返，但在旅游途中你

书面表达：假设你是某校高三学生李华，国庆期间你去黄山旅游了，美丽的黄山让你流连忘返，但在旅游途中你也注意到了个别游客的不文明行为，如乱丢垃圾，乱涂乱画甚至吸烟等。请你给黄山旅游网英文版的编辑发一封电子邮件，叙述你的所见以及所感

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Answer 1

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Dear editor,

During the National Day holiday, I went on a tour of Huangshan Mountain. During my trip I was deeply attracted by the breathtaking scenery — the beautiful pine trees, the strange-looking rocks, the splendid sea of clouds and so on. This could have been a perfect trip but for some tourists’ bad behavior. For example, some people left litter everywhere; others scribbled in some scenic spots. What’s more, I even noticed that there were one or two tourists who were smoking cigarettes! That’s much too dangerous, for it could easily lead to a forest fire.   

As we all know, Huangshan Mountain is world-famous for its beautiful natural sights, which is just what I take great pride in as a native of Huangshan. So we should make every effort to protect its environment and make it more and more beautiful.  

Best wishes.

Yours sincerely,

                                                 Li Hua

Answer 2

Dear sir,
I'd like to tell you something about my traveling to Huangshan this National Day.
Huangshan is one of the most famous mountains in China. It has so many beautiful scenaries that millions of people have been attracted to it. This time I have enjoyed the fancy pines, strange stones, cloud sea and the warm spring in Huangshan. I have taken a lot of pictures to show to my friends home. I hope they will share my pleasure here.
But at the same time, something bothers me during the tour. Some travellers throw away the trashes at will, which makes the moutains dirty. Some tourists scrawl on the walls of the temples, which makes them ugly. And some even smoke in the mountain. The smoking not only pollutes the air, but also brings danger of fire. I wish that this letter can be published on your Travel Net to remind and warn the tourists to mind their's P's and Q's and to protect the scenary.
Thank you.
Best wishes.
Yours LiHua