Question

帮忙翻译一篇英文的自我介绍，面试用

·····我在大学毕业前曾经做过讲解员，毕业之后做了9个月的高尔夫用品导购，还有中国体育彩票的客服/顾问，**酒店集团的会员卡电话销售，
上面是工作经历，还可以加一些比如说“我做销售工作是为了锻炼自己”、“我学习英语并不太擅长考试”。还有什么大家就即兴发挥吧···多谢！！！
被采纳的还会得到加分，再谢！！

Answer 1

Dear Sir,

I am very honor to have this opportunity to introduce myself, my name is xxx and from xxx, I graduated from xxx university, I believe your company is better enough for me to show my abilities and also make profits to your company.

I have worked as an expositor before I graduated from university, after school I worked as a sole guidance of golf goods for 9 months, and then to be customer service & consultant of China sports lotteries, what’s more, to be a telephone salesman of big hotel. I think the job of salesman is very useful to find out your ability and experience yourself, especially for young people. Besides, I think English is very important for everyone in our daily life, it is a international language, I learn English not for examination but for communicating with others English speakers fluently.

At last, I think my works experience and qualifications are suit for this job, and I will try my best to do it well, it will be very appreciated if you give me chance to try in this position.

希望可以帮到你！如果有要再加的，可以说一下！

Answer 2

以下是我自己翻译的，你看如何：

Dear boss,
I'm xx,I think your company is good,and i want to join you.
The followings are my work experiences.Thanks for listening.Before I guaduated from a college, i was a commentator.After it,I was a shopping guide of golf goods,an adviser of China sports lotteries and membership card seller of xx wineshop.
I was selling for practising myslef,I studied English,but I'm not good at English tests so much .Be that as it may,I hope to be employed by ur company,then I will try my best to make ur company better.I think it's a good chance for me and I will do a good job.
Thanking you so much.
xx

由于我高中还没毕业，水平有限，不足之处请指出，我会尽力帮助你修改到最好。。。。。。。。。。