创作思路:
要把事情写具体。能不能把事情写具体,那就看你是不是善于把事情一层层展开记叙,即把事情分为几个阶段,在这几个阶段中写出事情的发展变化。这样,文章的内容才会具体、生动。
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正文:
My Favorite Sport There are many kinds of interesting sports,such as basketball, football,swimming and running,but the most I like is swimming。When I was a little child,my father took me to the river which near my house to learn swimming。
Then,I found it's really fun and cool when I swim in the water,especially in summer,It's the most exciting thing to do when summer comes。I like swimming。It's so wonderful。
有很多种有趣的运动,比如说篮球,足球,游泳和跑步,但是我最喜欢的是游泳。当我还是个小孩的时候,我父亲就带我到附近的河里学游泳。后来,我发觉游泳真的很有趣,在水里游的时候很凉快,特别是在夏天。当夏天到来的时候,最令人兴奋的事就是游泳。我喜欢游泳,感觉好极了。
together. It makes me health.