Question

英语改错题

英语短文改错：
What is the favor of life?I do not know.Life is just like drinking water in winter ,only those whoever drink it know what's that by their own experience.In the sense,life is a rose,and no one can explain it clear whether it is a lovely flower with more thorns and thorny flower which is delicate and charming beyond compare. In order to not to aviod getting hurt by the thorns,somebody would like to stay a certain distance of the rose,but they do not realize that they lose the chance to enjoy the rose's delicacy at the same time. Every coin has two side,and life is also without exception.To it went without saying that life is bittersweet.Only those who are good ata savoring can get the true flavor of life.

英语改错，我只找到了6个..应该还有3个...并请说明改错理由

Answer 1

1.whoever--who
2.in the sense--in a sense，固定搭配，“在某种意义上”
3.&4.and thorny flower--or a thorny flower，whether...or...固定用法；而且缺少冠词
5.in order to not to--省掉not to，后面是avoid，逻辑问题
6.distance of--distance from，同理于away from
7.side--sides，可数名词复数
8.&9.to it went--省掉to，把went改成goes，这是事实，不是过去的动作，用一般现在时。

Answer 2

explain it clear --> explain it clearly
In order to not to aviod --> in order to not avoid
stay a certain distance --> stay in a certain distance
two side --> two sides
To it went without --> 去掉to

Answer 3

1somebody---someone 2whoever--who 3side--sides 4good---well 5went---goes 6in order to not to----in order not to do know--knows 8what's that----what that is 9compare---comparing 10to---去掉

Answer 4

9.To it went without --> 去掉to