Question

英语翻译~谢谢各位高手来此帮忙

上海金融中心是位于上海陆家嘴的一栋摩天大楼，是中国目前第一高楼、世界第三高楼、世界最高的平顶式大楼，整栋楼高492米。站在101楼向下看可以看到整个上海的全景。在这里我们切身感受到了上海经济的发达，见到了很多世界出名的银行。
下午是整个行程唯一的自由安排时间。我跟随几个同学来到了上海的大学城。我们走马观花的参观了同济大学、复旦大学、上海交通大学。觉得每个学校都有自己的文化底蕴，它给我们的是与我们财经院校不同的感觉。特别是上海交通大学它给我们的是一种古老的感觉，校园里有许多值得我们借鉴的地方。

今天的发现： 来到上海的环球金融中心，看到这样雄伟的建筑和金融业的发
展层次，见识了上海商业群体的繁华和不同层次商业化的不同经营市场。

我的计划： 做好文字和图片的记录，搜集素材，晚上回到住所完成当天的日记，总结当天的心得。

Answer 1

The Shanghai Financial Center, a well-known skyscraper located at Lujiazui, Shanghai, currently stands as the tallest building in China as well as the third tallest building in the world. The whole building stands up four hundred and ninety two meters in height with its worldwide renown of it being the world's tallest edifice in flat-top style. The intoxicating panoramic view of the great city of Shanghai is presented holistically on the one hundred and first floor, where we were exposed to the undeniable prosperity of the economic development of this city through a countless amount of world class banks.
I visited the university park of Shanghai along with a few of my colleagues in the afternoon when we had our only spare time of this journey. We managed to go to Tongji university, Fudan university and Shanghai Jiaotong/Communication university in one galloping trip. We all agreed to the fact that every campus had its cultural uniqueness, which gave us, in a general sense, a different feeling than our Economics & Finances Institute did.
We were especially impressed with Shanghai Jiaotong/Communication university for its appearance of having a sense of long being, thus traditionalism. There are lots of merits that could be applied to our school's refining.

一下这段不是整句。having done sth. 改成 i have done sth. 就是了。这里只是想与中文所表达的总结性语义相吻合。
Today's closing line: having been to the global center of finances in Shanghai; having realized the magnificence of the styles and sizes of Shanghai's buildings and the general stratification of the development of finances and banking with which they carry; having seen and experienced the prosperity of the business groups and activities in Shanghai as well as the difference in marketing operations in businesses that are commercialized in different ways and at different levels

My plan/agenda: keeping well documented the wording and picturing; looking for relevant sources; keeping a daily journal of the telling of thoughts and acquisitions every evening at my residence.

一点建议：英文切忌假大空。应为他比中文更容易体现出来。所以文章有些许细节添加和修改。目的是为了使其英文看上去更能体现其意思。而不简简单单是其表达方式。：）

Answer 2

Shanghai is located at Shanghai lujiazui financial center of a skyscraper, China is now the third tallest buildings, the world, and the world's highest flat-roofed type building, the whole building 492 meters high. Standing in the 101 building you can see the whole Shanghai look down the hill. Here we intimate feeling of Shanghai economy developed, met many world famous bank.
The afternoon is the only free time. I followed by several students came to Shanghai university. We typically of tongji university, and visited the fudan university, Shanghai jiaotong university. Feel every school has its own culture, it gives us a feeling of different financial institutions. Especially in Shanghai jiaotong university, it gives us a feeling of old, the campus has many worth our using for reference.

Today's discovery: come to Shanghai to see the world financial center, this magnificent buildings and financial hair
Exhibition in Shanghai, the business community and different levels of the commercialization of the different business market.

I plan to the words and pictures, collecting, evening to complete the domicile, summarizes the experiences of the diary.

Answer 3

Shanghai Lujiazui financial center of a skyscraper in Shanghai, is China's current tallest building, the world's third tower, the world's highest flat top style building, and the entire 492 meters tall. 101 floor standing looking down to see the whole panorama of Shanghai. Here we could feel the economic development of Shanghai, saw a lot of world famous banks.
Afternoon is the only free travel arrangements for the entire time. I follow a few students came to the university city of Shanghai. We skim the surface of the visited Tongji University, Fudan University, Shanghai Jiaotong University. That each school has its own culture, it gives us with our financial institutions is a different feeling. Shanghai Jiaotong University in particular, it gives us is an ancient sense of the campus there are many noteworthy places.

Today's discovery: to the Shanghai World Financial Center, to see this magnificent building and made the financial sector
Development levels, knowledge of the Shanghai downtown business groups and different levels of the different commercial business market.

My plan: make text and image records, collect material, back home at the day's journal, summed up the day's experiences