Question

帮忙检查英语作文的语法错误好吗

初一的 I wached a film called"Alice In Wonderland” last Sunday with my sister . It is a children's story . The heroine of the film is a girl called Alice .She is good-looking.One day,she went to take part in a party .She went into a hole with her rabbit ,because somrthing wrong happened . A journey is full of risks has happened in the hole.She bethought that she visited Wonderland thirteen years ago .This film is very interesting.It tells us we should be brave.This film is not only interesting,but also very significative.

Answer 1

1.she went to take part in a party .这个直接是she went to a party 或者she took part in a party 不过took part in 一般用于比较正式场合如参加会议等。
2.because somrthing 拼写错误，估计你是不小心打错了。。something
不过我觉得这句话可以改成because of something wrong,she went into a hole with her rabbit 。感觉会更顺点
3. A journey is full of risks has happened in the hole is是谓语的话不能再用现在完成时，full of risk 可以当成状语。同时现在完成时是指过去发生的事情持续到现在或者对现在任由影响的。这里用感觉有点小别扭，不过我个人觉得没错吧- -因为如果要改我觉得过去式可能更不合适。改：a journey that full of risks has happended in the hole

我就看出这么多啦，不过初一作文能写成这样不错啦~~想当年偶初一英语作文可是惨不忍睹滴~~这么早就会用not only but also 句型了。。这可是我们高中常用句型的说啊，还有only in this way can we..简直是万能王道句型。。
罗嗦了一顿，希望能有用~~

Answer 2

可以啊