写作思路：要直接简化任务语言。在叙述中，我们要把直接叙述变成间接叙述，尽可能简化人物语言。这样，即使情节连贯，又使语句“简练”。
Once, I went to the stationery store and bought a reading note.
When I got to the stationery store, I saw everything in the stationery store, such as school supplies, small toys, gifts and notebooks.
but I didn't see the trace of reading notes after walking many times. I went to the cashier and asked the cashier, ah! It turned out that the reading notes were hidden in the deepest part of the cabinet.
In this reading note, a little girl with braids is reading the book attentively, next to a pink mini bear. Turning to the first page, you can see the title.
author and reading time. Below, it will let us write the main content, the words and sentences I like, and let us make a sentence with the words we like, which can be filled in and written at the same time.
Then turn to the second page, you can see that you can fill in the harvest of reading and the comments of parents and teachers.
The above items are very interesting. I bought this reading note to make my reading performance better and better.
一次，我去文具店买了一本阅读笔记。
到了文具店，我看到文具店里应有尽有，学习用品、小玩具、礼品、本子，可是走了好多圈我都没有看到阅读笔记的踪影，我就走向收银台去询问了收银员，啊！原来阅读笔记藏在了柜子里的最深处。
这本阅读笔记上有一个扎着麻花辫的小女孩正专心致志地看着书，旁边还有一只粉红的迷你小熊。翻开第一页，可以看到书名、作者和阅读时间，下面它会让我们写主要内容、我喜欢的词句，还会让我们用喜欢的词语造一个句子，一面就填写完了。
接着翻开第二页，可以看到上面可以填写看书的收获和家长、老师的评语。
以上几个项目都很有意思吧，我买了这本阅读笔记，是想让我的阅读成绩越来越好，越来越棒。
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