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我写了一篇英语作文，帮我修改一下好吗？ 非常感谢你！

My Winter Holidays
My winter holidays will end soon. Although it's very short,I can enjoy Spring Festival. Spring Festral is our traditional festival. During the holidays, I visited my relatives and I got a lot of red bads. I can do everything I like, such as reading books., playing games, watching TV, traveling and even sleeping all the day and so on. My winter holidays were crazy and exciting. I really have learnt a lot. Therefore, I had a nice holiday. So I like the winter holidays very much.

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My Winter Holiday
My winter holiday will end soon. Although it's very short,I enjoyed the Spring Festival. The Spring Festral is our traditional festival. During the holidays, I visited my relatives and got a lot of red bags. I could do everything I like, such as reading books, playing games, watching TV, traveling and even sleeping all day and so on. My winter holiday was crazy and exciting. I really have learnt a lot. In a word, I had a nice holiday. So I like the winter holiday very much.

总起来说还是不错的。
我想说的是，the winter holiday是想表达寒假的意思吗，如果是，用单数就可以，寒假就一个；therefore是因果关系中表示所以的，可能你就是想表达所以的意思，不过换成in a word “总之”，更合适些，你说呢；时态注意一下。