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Shanghai is my hometown. It's in east of China. Shanghai is an international city as well. There are many famous buildings in Shanghai. Such us the Shanghai Zoo, the Shanghai Grand Theatre and so on. It is interesting to play there. Shanghai's food also very famous. The dumplings are very nice and delicious. The world EXPO takes place in Shanghai and everybody comes to Shanghai to visit. So Shanghai is welcome. I love Shanghai.
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因为我不是上海人,所以对一些地名不太了解,内容上没帮你改多少,但结构上给你做了些修改,希望楼主能满意哈~~
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Shanghai is my hometown. It's in the east of China. As everybody knows,Shanghai is an international city. I think many places of interest are worth visiting,such as the Shanghai Zoo, the Shanghai Grand Theatre and so on. You can visit most of the places of interest in a couple of days.Shanghai's food is also very famous. The dumplings are very nice and delicious. The world EXPO takes place in Shanghai and many Chinese and foreign visitors come to Shanghai. Certainly,Shanghai will welcome all visitors. I love Shanghai.
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1, Shanghai is my hometown. It's in east of China改为 Shanghai is my hometown which is in the east of China会加分//
2,Such us改为such as
3,and so on去掉
4,So Shanghai is welcome.要表达什么意思???
其他的就是句子精不精彩的问题了
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Shanghai

Shanghai is my hometown. It is in the east of China. Shanghai is also an international city. There are many tourist attractions in Shanghai such as the Shanghai Zoo, Shanghai Grand theatre and so on. Shanghai's food is also very famous. The dumplings are very delicious. The wold EXPO is held in Shanghai and foreigners come to Shanghai to visit it. Shanghai welcomes them. I love Shanghai.

参考资料: 13歲的初二生。 學了英語13年 (新加坡人)

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