Question

找找这篇英语作文的语法错误

帮帮忙，找找这篇英语作文的语法错误或任何有错误的地方，咱可以改正一下哈，谢谢！

I watch Alice in Winderland in summer holiday.Alice is a 19-year-old girl.She joined a party with her mother.During yhe party,she saw a white rabbit and followed it.Then,she entered in Wonderland.In fact ,Alice have got to Wonderland when she was a kid ,but now she forget.In Wonderland,Alice met many old friend.The white rabbit,Bill the Lizard,the Caterpillar,the Duchess,the Cheshire Catand and the Darmouse.Centianly,the White Queen and the Queen of Hearts.With the help of the Hatter,Absolem and so many friends.Alice realized a great mission,and she had to finsh the mission.Finally,Alice killed the Jabberwocky,ended of the evil of the Queen of Hearts,restore the glory of the former in Wonderland.
I still remrember a scene.The day before the day of battle,Alice found Absolem and asked him what can she do .But Absolem could not help Alice,Then,Absolem let Alice know who is Alice.About the memory in Wonderland,Alice realized there were not Wonderland, but a real world.So Alice faced herself bravely,and teied her best to kill the Jabberwocky.
Alice, a pure lovely little girl, full of curiosity and from thirst, her innocence reflects belongs to the children, in the growing process of children, the pure often by erosion. Therefore, the pure for children and adults Alice extremely attractive, and treasured. Alice also represents the humanism, don't wear tights, stockings, even refusing to get married, this is the Renaissance of free people. She thought, calm, a bit crazy, humanism delegates, pursuit of humanity against god season.
If, as long as we have always believed in dreams, will eventually come true? Perhaps we are crazy, but we can be the best. Can be impractical, but must be down-to-earth, Can the unreasonable, but must be brave and strong! Yes, have faith, to insist, is also a kind of belief!

Answer 1

watch该watched 在你写之前动作已发生

in该into 表一个连贯的动作（她不是从一个动力掉进去的嘛）

Alice have got to 该 has

forget后加it

many old friend改 friends

The white rabbit,Bill the Lizard,the Caterpillar,the Duchess,the Cheshire Catand and the Darmouse.Centianly,the White Queen and the Queen of Hearts改为一句话会更连贯。and the Darmouse.Centianly 改 the Darmouse and centianly

ended of the evil of the Queen of Hearts,restore the glory of the former in Wonderland.语法有错。句中多谓语，把后两个动词改为分词。
ending the Queen of Hearts' evil and restoring the glory of the former in Wonderland.（end 可以是及物动词）

The day before the day of battle改The day before the battle

Alice realized there were not 改 Alice realized it was not

teied改tried

full of curiosity 改 is full of curiosity

reflects改 reflections

belongs 改 belong

in the growing process of children, the pure often by erosion这句话我不知道你想表达什么意思，试着用从句或用非谓语动词改写

Alice extremely attractive, and treasured 改attractived （and前后一致）

don't改 being unwilling to

this 改 which 改为从句，或者断掉另写一句

have改 had （虚拟语气）

will eventually come true改为 Those will eventually come true？（不太了解你想表达什么）

最后几句是不是你引用的？如果是可能是某种特殊用法或习惯用法，我才疏学浅，如果不是，那都有语法错误。倒数第二句少主语，尾句多谓语动词。