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谁帮我看看这篇英语作文有没有什么错误，谢谢，有错帮忙说下正确句子。

How do I spend my summer vacation
Now , all student are spending their summer vacations. We are all very happy we have two months to relax . In these days .I ‘m not very busy but free .
Our homework is not too much , so we have many times to relax .I usually do my homework in the moring . So I get up not too late . And I also like listen to English at night.
And on my vacation , I like watching TV very much .I usually watch TV after doing my homework or after lunch、after supper .But I don’t watch TV for a long time . That makes my eyes turn to bad ,and my mother doesn’t like me to watch TV for a long time . I also play computer , I often read the news ,study English or play computer games on computer . It ‘s very interesting ,I can learn some interesting and helpful things ,too.
Except these things, I sometimes go to my neighbour’s house to look after their son ,Liu Yulin .He’s a cute but a little naughty boy .He always make us very happy .So ,we all like him very much..
But for many reasons , I don’t go sighting .What a pity ! But I hope I can go on a trip next summer vacation.
How about your summer vacation?
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Answer 1

How do I spend my summer vacation
Now , all student are on their summer vacation. We are all very happy because we have two months to relax . In these days .I ‘m not very busy but rather free.
Our homework is not too much , so we have plenty of time to relax .I usually do my homework in the morning, so I get up early everyday. And I also like to listen to English at night.
During my vacation , I also like to watch TV. I usually watch TV after doing my homework or after lunch or supper .But I don’t watch TV for a long time, since that is bad for my eyes and my mother doesn’t like me to watch TV too much . I also use the computer. I often read the news, study English and play computer games . It ‘s very interesting ,and I can learn more interesting and helpful things.
Besides these things, I sometimes go to my neighbour’s house to look after their son ,Liu Yulin .He’s a cute but a little naughty boy .He always make us very happy .So ,we all like him very much..
But for many reasons , I can't go on a trip .What a pity ! But I hope I can go on a trip next summer vacation.
How about your summer vacation?

写得很不错哦！

Answer 2

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.I usually do my homework in the moring . So I get up not too late
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I also like listen to English at ，like后面跟to do 形式，like to
after lunch、after supper .有点罗嗦，after lunch or supper .
That makes my eyes turn to bad，turn to有求助于某人的意思，似乎不太合适，建议去掉梁歼
But for many reasons , I don’t go sighting don’t改为can not 与后文更相符

Answer 3

We are all very happy that we have two months to relax

We don't have much homework , so we have more time to relax

So I don't get up too late . And I also like listening to English at night.

And in my vacation time

I usually watch TV after doing my homework, after lunch or supper.

But I don’t watch TV for too long.

That makes my eyes hurt ,and my mother doesn’t like me to watch TV for too long.

I often read the news ,study English or play computer games on computer.

neighbours'

He always makes us very happy

I didn’t go to any sighting .What a pity ! But I hope I can go for a trip in the next summer vacation.

不错啊 多裤举世大年纪了？ 语法没太多毛病，小答李地方有些毛躁胡肢。