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求大神帮写一篇大一英语作文 要求：全新出炉 在网上抄的不要

题目：[304508] Traffic Jam
要求
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay on the topic of Traffic Jam. You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below.
1．在现代社会，城市交通问题变得越来越严重
2．城市交通问题的表现以及对人们生活的影响
3．解决的方法与措施

Answer 1

At present, traffic jam has turn into a primary issue which most city dwellers, especially those who live in metropolis. Have to confront in their everyday lives.

At first ,owing to the fact that the vehicles keep giving off harmful gases during traffic jams ,air pollution and furthermore, global warming will deteriorate. In addition, traffic jams will affect the effectiveness of work, because the people have to spend much more time on way to office than necessary, and their work will be distracted or delayed. Apart from this, traffic jam might give rise to more traffic accidents and therefore becomes a menace to people’s lives.

So harmful traffic jam is, the number of private cars still goes up apace. As a result, people have to choose a tool other than walk to go to work. Being flexible and relatively convenient, private car becomes a very attractive choice .Moreover , owning a private car, especially in some developing countries, is itself a symbol of wealth and high social position. In some developed countries such as USA it is also the symbol of independence and maturity. Anyway ,owning and driving private cars are regarded by many people as basic human rights.

Undoubtedly, traffic jam must be ,and can be alleviated by correct means .In my view, spending more money on public transportation systems may be a feasible means .Needless to say, policies which encourage people to put these systems to full use, for example, giving certain subsidies, are necessary. In the meantime, measures to restrict the use of private cars, such as levying higher taxes on cars or petrol, its fuel, or exerting more restrictions on the distribution of certificate, should be taken.

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Answer 2

绝对原创，新鲜出炉。

交通堵塞
Traffic Jam

在现代社会，城市交通问题变得越来越严重。一方面因为很多人涌向大城市，另外一方面，买车的人越来越多，私家车太多了。城市交通太拥挤了，坐车需要等很久，而且城市的空气也不好。
In modern society, city traffic problem has become more and more serious. On one hand, because a lot of people go to the big city, on the other hand, more and more people buy a car, the car is too much. City traffic is too crowded, the car need towait for a long time, but the city's air is not good.
城市交通这么不好对人们生活的影响很大，出行很困难，办事不方便。空气质量越来越差，一年看到蓝天的时间在逐年减少。人们的心情也不好，患癌的人越来越多了。
Big city traffic is so bad influence on people's life, travel difficult, not easy. Airquality is getting worse, a year to see the blue sky time decreases in year after year. The mood is not good, more and more people with cancer.
如何解决的城市交通问题呢？我觉得需要做好以下几个方面，政府引导企业去二三线城市发展，然后再一线城市提倡公交车出门，提倡自行车出门，减少私家车出门的数量。
How to solve the traffic problems in the city? I feel the need to do the following, the government guide enterprises to two or three line city development, and then first-tier cities advocating bus out, advocate the bike, the decrease in the number ofprivate cars go out.
希望城市交通问题得到更快的改善。
Hope the city traffic problems were faster improvement.

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十分中式！

追答

原创的啊，这个比较符合西方人的思维模式了。

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还是谢谢你

还是谢谢你