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This is a picture of my ideal room. In my ideal room, I have a bed. It is near the window.
And my chair is under the desk. My book、my pencil box and my desk lamp are on the desk.
Is computer on the table? No, it isn't. It's a television. Oh,that's my bookcase. Many books are in the bookcase. And a clock, a photo, an antique, two plants, a dictionary and a fish tank. Do you like my ideal room? I love my idear room !

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This is a picture of my ideal room. In my ideal room, I have a bed. It is near the window.
And the chair is under the desk. The book, the pencil box, and the desk lamp are on the desk.
Is computer on the table? No, it isn't. On it is a television. Oh,that's my bookcase. Many books are in the bookcase. And a clock, a photo, an antique, two plants, a dictionary and a fish tank are also in it. Do you like my ideal room? I love my idear room !

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除了also这里没有了吗？