Question

一篇英语作文，题目：6月7日是父亲节，请你以My Father为题…

Answer 1

My Father
My father is a doctor who works really hard.
He has devoted himself to his career for he gets up very early and gets back home late. What he thinks about all day long is the patients and how he can release the pains of his patients. And he will do whatever he can to help his patients.
In his free time, he likes reading books and often take notes on important points. What's more, he published a book. Besides reading, he likes listening to music to get relaxed.
That is my father. I love him and I'm proud of him.

Answer 2

建议你自己写了以后拿出来大家给你修改，这样你才会进步。

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额，主要是不会写感人故事

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首先作文要求字数是多少， 如果你是初高中生， 一般就是50-80吧。

不用你写太多的， 第一段介绍爸爸的性格职业（2-3句话）， 第二段写故事， 最后一段结尾说爱爸爸之类的话。去头掐尾， 中间的故事要不了几句话的。
不要像写中文那样去写， 比如中间一段， 你可以开头写爸爸陪我做了什么， 比如生病的时候陪着你， 直到你病好。

我觉得要想学好， 特别是英语， 一定要自己多写， 加油吧！

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谢谢

Answer 3

All over the world，no one can love us more than our we come across bad things，they will never hesitate to offer us we fail our exam.
I walked into the room and said to my father， ＂dad， I broke something.＂ Father got angry， blew his beard and stared， and he kicked me in the ass without saying a word. I was kicked out.
father always tends to punish us while mother tells us to work harder next e＇s no doubt that they show love in different they indeed love is the place that we can find comfort no matter what come back to see them as often as you are always ready to support you and it is time that you cared for them.