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帮忙改一下这篇英语演讲稿，马上就演讲了，求大神帮忙，改好就行，多谢啦

Today,the topic of my speech is about wolf.

As we all know,the wolves are a kind of fiendish animal.Sometimes they'll eat their partners,include their kids.Sometimes they'll bite away their body parts which harmper their actions.But all of these are to live.
In some people's eyes,the wolves are lovely.
They work in unity and close cooperation,having strict displine.they are decisive and able to play to the score.they are like shadow,coming and go whitout leaving a trace.They have higher superior intelligence quotient,this is an important reason of why they are natural strong performers.
In the "Wolf Totem" book，I appreciated the wolves'mien.Under the pain of lost children,they combat with life,they roar,they fight at close quarters。Only the death could terminate the enmity from the heart.
We can learn a lot from wolves,from my point of view,in oue life,the most important thing is that we must fight for dignity.
That's all for my speech.Thanks for listening.

Answer 1

给你加点过渡词，这样句子层次性更明显：
I'm very happy have this opportunity to stand here. Now, let's talk some business. The topic of my speech today is about wolf.

It seem to a lot of people that the wolves are a kind of fiendish animal.Sometimes they'll eat their partners,include their kids.Sometimes they'll bite away their body parts which harmper their actions.But all of these are to live.
While ,In some people's eyes,the wolves are lovely.They work in unity and close cooperation,having strict displine.they are decisive and able to play to the score.they are like shadow,coming and go whitout leaving a trace.They have higher superior intelligence quotient,this is an important reason of why they are natural strong performers.
As far as I'm concerned，I appreciated the wolves'mien.Under the pain of lost children,they combat with life,they roar,they fight at close quarters。Only the death could terminate the enmity from the heart.
In a word, there are many things that we can learn from the wolves in our life,the most important thing is that we must fight for dignity.
That's all for my speech.Thanks for listening.

追问

文章有错误吗？有些词是我查的,怕有问题

追答

这是用于什么的稿子？说实话 感觉有些中国式英语