Question

英语翻译修改

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sorry,忘也写内容了，就是上面的这个问题，回答满意的话，两个的悬赏分都会送上！谢谢！

Answer 1

你原来的翻译基础不错，以下只做了小的修改：

Recently, the weather in Xi'an is turning cool, how about Shanghai? Is it still hot?
Please be sure to take care of your health while working hard.

Last time when you came to Xi'an, I have mentioned that I want to swith to another position.
However, since I lacked preparation at that time, I did not formally raised my suggestion.

Since you left Xi’an, I lose no time to study mechanical design software and other knowledges.

Now,I can independently complete the general 3D modeling works and so on, although I do not have a good mechanical background.

But I believe that through my own efforts and learning, I am able to do a CAD engineer's daily work. If possible, I would like to support the Japan division's machinery work.
In addition, Xi'an is my hometown, I think it's comparatively stable here.

Currently I am very busy with my daily work , and I don't have software for practice at daytime.

I would like to learn more knowledge, and hope to have a greater development. Although I find this request very unreasonable, but I still want you to give me a chance.Please allow me to transfer to a CAD engineering position.

Finally, wish you success in your work.
再次修改了，已经不错了。祝你成功！

Answer 2

where is the translation?