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短文改错 last weekend,our class went hiking .Early in the morning ,we gathered at people's S

短文改错 last weekend,our class went hiking .Early in the morning ,we gathered at people's Square in the city centre and then head for the South Mountain,which was 8 kilometres away.Our goal was to the top,from which we could enjoy a good view.
It was an exhausted hike and the heats consumed all our energy.Therefore,when we finally reached to our destination,the view took our breath away.It was well worth walking such long distance.Because I not only got relaxed by enjoying the beauty of nature but also learned the truth which our efforts will always pay off in end.

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Last weekend,our class went hiking .Early in the morning ,we gathered at people's Square in the city centre and then head(改成headed) for the South Mountain,which was 8 kilometres away.Our goal was to the top,from which we could enjoy a good view.
It was an exhausted(改成exhausting) hike and the heats(改成heat) consumed all our energy.Therefore(改成However),when we finally reached to(去掉这个to) our destination,the view took our breath away. It was well worth walking such (此处加a) long distance.Because I not only got relaxed by enjoying the beauty of nature but also learned the truth which(改成that) our efforts will always pay off in (此处加the) end.