Question

英语短文改错 求解

Answer 1

I was in line at Trader Joe's and the young woman in front of me had her card refused, she nervously handed the cashier another card, that was also refused and then a final card that had just $5.47. She asked the cashier to cancel the trade. However, I offered to pay the balance, which was $20 something. The woman was very thankful. On my way out,(此处加了个逗号） the manager handed me some mixed flowers. I saw he came with feelings. I doubted that whether he would start to cry when he opened his mouth. I accepted the flowers and the world had become a better place. 所有改动的地方我都加粗了字号