Question

雅思写作容易犯哪些错误？ ?

Answer 1

各种前后不一致?说话肯定前面说完了后面得跟上吧!比如：When?one?have?enough?money,?she?can?do?anything?she?want?to?do.?one是第三人称单数，而且have应改为has;?want应改为wants,?典型的主谓不一致，要改写的没改写;?改为：When?one?has?money,?she?can?do?anything?she?wants?(to?do).?
?中式化。比如：There?are?many?ways?we?get?to?know?the?outside?world.?分析：“there?are?many?ways”以及“we?get?to?know?the?outsideworld”。原本两个句子很正常，但用中式思维把两个句子一连起来，感觉就不对了，改为：There?are?many?ways?for?us?to?learn?about?the?outside?world.?
句子随意添加?一般都是写完了一句话之后，咦，不对，少写了一些东西，得加上去，然后就出现了这样的句子。?There?are?many?way?to?get?the?news.?For?example?by?TV,?radio,?newspaper?and?soon.?其实也很好改，注意标点符号的使用，news后面加了点，就是句子的结束了，然后For还大写，这样后面就彻底成一个句子啦，不对;?改为：There?are?many?ways?to?get?the?news,?for?example,?by?TV,?radio,?andnewspaper.?
词性用错?这个还要解释么，介词当动词用;形容词当副词用;名词当动词用等。?None?can?negative?the?importance?of?money.?negative是什么词性呀，用到这里了，应该用动词：否定，deny!?指代不清?比如：Mary?was?friendly?to?my?sister?because?she?wanted?her?to?be?her?bridesmaid.?这个句子相当于“我是谁的谁的谁的谁”。考官看到直接就蒙圈了…?改为：Mary?was?friendly?to?my?sister?because?she?wanted?my?sister?to?be?her?bridesmaid.?
修饰词错位?英语与汉语不同，放错一个位置，句子的意思就会完全发生变化啦!会造成了不必要的误解。?比如：He?believe?him?can?do?it?well?and?he?will?better?know?the?world?outside?the?world.?分析：better位置不对啊，应该是?he?will?know?the?world?outside?the?world?better，放到最后。?
用词不当?比如：The?increasing?use?of?chemical?obstacles?in?agriculture?also?makes?pollution.?显然，把obstacles“障碍”，“障碍物”误作substance“物质”了。另外“the?increasing?use(不断增加的使用)”应改为“abusive?use(滥用)”。??????????