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假如你是李明，调查了中学生如何度过漫长的暑假，并用英语给某英语报社投稿，调查结果如下：73%的学生感到不高兴，因为他们的暑假是这样度过的：1.在家请家教，2.参加各种培训班，有18%的学生感到高兴，他们的暑假是这样度过的：1.在爷爷奶奶家度过2.结交了新的朋友，有9%的学生感到孤独和无聊，因为他们的暑假是这样度过的：1.不准外出与朋友相处，2.上网玩游戏，
建议：常鼓励孩子多参加社会实践，使他们的假期生活丰富多彩
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Dear editor:
Receutly I have made a servey about how the middle school students
spend their summer holidays.The results are as follows.

Yours LiMing

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Answer 1

Dear editor:
Receutly I have made a servey about how the middle school students spend their summer holidays.The results are as follows.

To my happiness,18 percent of the students felt happy because they visited their grandparents and knew more new friends.
But 73 percent of the students were not happy,means most students didn't enjoy their vacation.They spent their time in studing at home with tutor or joining kinds of lessons.
Even worse,9 percent of them were boring and lonely.They were not allowded to go out with friends so that they had to surf the Internet or watch TV.
I think parents should inspire kids to do something in society and make their vacation more colorful.

Yours LiMing

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Answer 2

Dear editor:
Receutly I have made a servey about how the middle school students spend their summer holidays.The results are as follows.
73 percent students are not happy. They spend their summer vacation in study some new lessons.They are unhappy.But 18 percent students are pleased with their summer vacation. Because they stay with their grandparents and make some friends .However,9 percent pupils played computers at home ,because they did not allowed to went out .We should often encourage children to take part in social practice and make their vacation rich and colorful life.
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