Question

这篇英语短文有没有语法错误。

hello,everyone!Glad to meet you in this beautiful school.the new life already started.we bring to our dream on the new journey of learning .i think it will be important turning point in our life. i hope we can learn from each other and help each other.i believe we can get into the better world in three years!

Answer 1

bring to 用得不对吧，你毕告空是要表达带着梦醒踏上学习的旅程吗？改成wo take our dream start the new journey of learning. 后一句也不对，你是要表达对我们的人生很重要，还手瞎是说是一个转折点？若是前者，这样表达:i think it is important for our life.若为后者，则i think it is a major turn point of our life.其他我觉得没问友春题了哈！呵呵~水平有限，改得不对，请见谅。

Answer 2

我大写的地方是你需要改的
1 第二句开头要大晌闷些，宴败弯
2 the new life IS already started.
3 .we bring to our dream on the new journey of learning 把to删掉，dreams
4 i think it will be A important turning point in our life.
5 i believe we can get into the better world in three years! 改成we can live and study on good terms in the three years later.我们枯搜会学习生活上相处融洽的意思。

Answer 3

Hello,everyone!Glad to meet you in this beautiful school.A new life has already started.Bringing dreams ，we will start off on a completely new study journey.I think it will be an important turning point in our life. I hope we can learn from each other and help each other.I believe we can get into a better world in the following three years!

Answer 4

Hello,everyone!Glad to meet you in this beautiful school.The new life has already started.we bring to our dream on the new journey of learning .i think it will be an important turning point in our life. i hope we can learn from each other and help each other.i believe we can get into the better world in three years!

Answer 5

改为the new life has already started.
We bring our dreams on the new journey of learning.I think it will be an important change in our life.注意镇宽首御枣亮字母大写岩蚂！