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WHYAMILEARNINGENGLISH?（想表达的意思）Becauseitissuchfuntolearningenglishanditisveryinteresti...
WHY AM I LEARNING ENGLISH? （想表达的意思）
Because it is such fun to learning english and it is very interesting.
（因为学英语很快乐很有趣）
For example,you can read very interesting english novel and talk about to many foreign people in english.（你可以读很多有趣的英文小说，和外国人聊天）
And then make friends with them. How fun?（然后和他们交朋友）
Most important thing is you will get a good job if your english is good.
（最重要的是你将找到一份好工作）
But it is not ,don’t be worry . Just like me, my english isn’t very good yet .
（但如果还没有，也别担心。就想我一样，我的英文也还不怎么好）
Because I knew nothing about english one year ago!
（因为在一年我什么都不懂！）
I just learning english for one year and I can write like this!nothing’s impossible
（我只学了一年的英文就能写这些了，没什么不可能）
Sometimes you maybe worry about something.
（有时候你可能会为某些事担心）
as so many people are learning english, how do I get better ?
（就像那么多人都在学英文，我怎么胜过他们）
don’t need to worry very much.
（其实不必太担心）
Some people can’t do something themselves，they want to tell you that you can’t do it either!（这句是幸福来敲门里的~~）
Don’t mind!
（别在乎那些！）
If you think of it’s worth doing and you love english enough . just protect it and join me. your dream will come true!
（如果你觉得值得，你足够热爱英文，尽管捍卫它然后加入我，你的梦想一定会实现的！）
I have to talk about two people who helped me ,
（我不得不谈论下两个帮助过我的人）
a gril and my best friend. they are both important in my life .
（一个女孩和我最好的一个朋友，他们都是我生命中很重要的人）
Though they both without me now. The girl was a english major student and she changed my life .（虽然他们都不在我的身边.）（女孩是英语专业的学生，她改变了我的人生）
After I knew her, I began to studied hard.
（在我认识她以后，我开始努力的学习）
Because I loved her and I could see the sunshine in her face! It was the happiest time in my life.（因为我爱她，我能在她的脸上看到我的快乐，那是我生命中最快乐的时光）
It happened to one year ago. I began to crazy about learning english in order to write the first of english letter to send her at her birthday,（这发生在一年前，我拼命的学习英语，为了在她生日那天为她写一封英文信）
Finally I’ve got it. But she left soon after that .
（最终我做到了，但她不久就离开了我）
When I was down , my best friend hemingchao always with me and he turned me on . he’s the farthest friend close me in the world and he gave the most helpful to me.（当我最失落的时候，我的好朋友何明超总是在我身边，他让振作起来。他是这个世界上离我最远的朋友，但却是给我最大帮助的人）
He gone to abroad for study long ago.
（他很早就去了国外留学）
Why am I learning english ?because I love english and two people woke me up.
（我为什么学习英文，因为我爱英文和有两个人唤醒了我）
小弟基础不好，希望大家指出我的错误 。
谢谢了！ 展开
Because it is such fun to learning english and it is very interesting.
（因为学英语很快乐很有趣）
For example,you can read very interesting english novel and talk about to many foreign people in english.（你可以读很多有趣的英文小说，和外国人聊天）
And then make friends with them. How fun?（然后和他们交朋友）
Most important thing is you will get a good job if your english is good.
（最重要的是你将找到一份好工作）
But it is not ,don’t be worry . Just like me, my english isn’t very good yet .
（但如果还没有，也别担心。就想我一样，我的英文也还不怎么好）
Because I knew nothing about english one year ago!
（因为在一年我什么都不懂！）
I just learning english for one year and I can write like this!nothing’s impossible
（我只学了一年的英文就能写这些了，没什么不可能）
Sometimes you maybe worry about something.
（有时候你可能会为某些事担心）
as so many people are learning english, how do I get better ?
（就像那么多人都在学英文，我怎么胜过他们）
don’t need to worry very much.
（其实不必太担心）
Some people can’t do something themselves，they want to tell you that you can’t do it either!（这句是幸福来敲门里的~~）
Don’t mind!
（别在乎那些！）
If you think of it’s worth doing and you love english enough . just protect it and join me. your dream will come true!
（如果你觉得值得，你足够热爱英文，尽管捍卫它然后加入我，你的梦想一定会实现的！）
I have to talk about two people who helped me ,
（我不得不谈论下两个帮助过我的人）
a gril and my best friend. they are both important in my life .
（一个女孩和我最好的一个朋友，他们都是我生命中很重要的人）
Though they both without me now. The girl was a english major student and she changed my life .（虽然他们都不在我的身边.）（女孩是英语专业的学生，她改变了我的人生）
After I knew her, I began to studied hard.
（在我认识她以后，我开始努力的学习）
Because I loved her and I could see the sunshine in her face! It was the happiest time in my life.（因为我爱她，我能在她的脸上看到我的快乐，那是我生命中最快乐的时光）
It happened to one year ago. I began to crazy about learning english in order to write the first of english letter to send her at her birthday,（这发生在一年前，我拼命的学习英语，为了在她生日那天为她写一封英文信）
Finally I’ve got it. But she left soon after that .
（最终我做到了，但她不久就离开了我）
When I was down , my best friend hemingchao always with me and he turned me on . he’s the farthest friend close me in the world and he gave the most helpful to me.（当我最失落的时候，我的好朋友何明超总是在我身边，他让振作起来。他是这个世界上离我最远的朋友，但却是给我最大帮助的人）
He gone to abroad for study long ago.
（他很早就去了国外留学）
Why am I learning english ?because I love english and two people woke me up.
（我为什么学习英文，因为我爱英文和有两个人唤醒了我）
小弟基础不好，希望大家指出我的错误 。
谢谢了！ 展开
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Because it is fun and interesting to learn english.
（因为学英语很快乐很有趣）
For example,you can read many interesting english novels and talk with many foreigners in english.（你可以读很多有趣的英文小说，和外国人聊天）
And then make friends with them. How fun!（然后和他们交朋友）
The most important thing is that you will get a good job if your english is good.
（最重要的是你将找到一份好工作）
But if not ,don’t worry . Just like me, my english isn’t very good yet .
（但如果还没有，也别担心。就想我一样，我的英文也还不怎么好）
Because I knew nothing about english one year ago!
（因为在一年我什么都不懂！）
I have just learned english for one year and I can write like this!nothing’s impossible
（我只学了一年的英文就能写这些了，没什么不可能）
Sometimes you maybe worry about something.
（有时候你可能会为某些事担心）
as so many people are learning english, how do I get better ?
（就像那么多人都在学英文，我怎么胜过他们）
don’t need to worry much.
（其实不必太担心）
Some people can’t do something themselves，they want to tell you that you can’t do it either!（这句是幸福来敲门里的~~）
Don’t mind!
（别在乎那些！）
If you think it’s worth doing and you love english enough . just protect it and join me. your dream will come true!
（如果你觉得值得，你足够热爱英文，尽管捍卫它然后加入我，你的梦想一定会实现的！）
I have to talk about two people who helped me ,
（我不得不谈论下两个帮助过我的人）
a gril and my best friend. they are both important in my life .
（一个女孩和我最好的一个朋友，他们都是我生命中很重要的人）
Though they are not with me now. The girl was a student in english major and she changed my life .（虽然他们都不在我的身边.）（女孩是英语专业的学生，她改变了我的人生）
After I knew her, I began to study hard.
（在我认识她以后，我开始努力的学习）
Because I loved her and I could see the sunshine in her face! It was the happiest time in my life.（因为我爱她，我能在她的脸上看到我的快乐，那是我生命中最快乐的时光）
It happened one year ago. I began to be crazy about learning english in order to write the first english letter to send her at her birthday,（这发生在一年前，我拼命的学习英语，为了在她生日那天为她写一封英文信）
Finally I’ve got it. But she left soon after that .
（最终我做到了，但她不久就离开了我）
When I was down , my best friend hemingchao was always with me and he cheered me up . he’s the farthest friend to me in the world and he gave the most helpful to me.（当我最失落的时候，我的好朋友何明超总是在我身边，他让振作起来。他是这个世界上离我最远的朋友，但却是给我最大帮助的人）
He went abroad for study long ago.
（他很早就去了国外留学）
Why am I learning english ?because I love english and two people woke me up.
（我为什么学习英文，因为我爱英文和有两个人唤醒了我）
（因为学英语很快乐很有趣）
For example,you can read many interesting english novels and talk with many foreigners in english.（你可以读很多有趣的英文小说，和外国人聊天）
And then make friends with them. How fun!（然后和他们交朋友）
The most important thing is that you will get a good job if your english is good.
（最重要的是你将找到一份好工作）
But if not ,don’t worry . Just like me, my english isn’t very good yet .
（但如果还没有，也别担心。就想我一样，我的英文也还不怎么好）
Because I knew nothing about english one year ago!
（因为在一年我什么都不懂！）
I have just learned english for one year and I can write like this!nothing’s impossible
（我只学了一年的英文就能写这些了，没什么不可能）
Sometimes you maybe worry about something.
（有时候你可能会为某些事担心）
as so many people are learning english, how do I get better ?
（就像那么多人都在学英文，我怎么胜过他们）
don’t need to worry much.
（其实不必太担心）
Some people can’t do something themselves，they want to tell you that you can’t do it either!（这句是幸福来敲门里的~~）
Don’t mind!
（别在乎那些！）
If you think it’s worth doing and you love english enough . just protect it and join me. your dream will come true!
（如果你觉得值得，你足够热爱英文，尽管捍卫它然后加入我，你的梦想一定会实现的！）
I have to talk about two people who helped me ,
（我不得不谈论下两个帮助过我的人）
a gril and my best friend. they are both important in my life .
（一个女孩和我最好的一个朋友，他们都是我生命中很重要的人）
Though they are not with me now. The girl was a student in english major and she changed my life .（虽然他们都不在我的身边.）（女孩是英语专业的学生，她改变了我的人生）
After I knew her, I began to study hard.
（在我认识她以后，我开始努力的学习）
Because I loved her and I could see the sunshine in her face! It was the happiest time in my life.（因为我爱她，我能在她的脸上看到我的快乐，那是我生命中最快乐的时光）
It happened one year ago. I began to be crazy about learning english in order to write the first english letter to send her at her birthday,（这发生在一年前，我拼命的学习英语，为了在她生日那天为她写一封英文信）
Finally I’ve got it. But she left soon after that .
（最终我做到了，但她不久就离开了我）
When I was down , my best friend hemingchao was always with me and he cheered me up . he’s the farthest friend to me in the world and he gave the most helpful to me.（当我最失落的时候，我的好朋友何明超总是在我身边，他让振作起来。他是这个世界上离我最远的朋友，但却是给我最大帮助的人）
He went abroad for study long ago.
（他很早就去了国外留学）
Why am I learning english ?because I love english and two people woke me up.
（我为什么学习英文，因为我爱英文和有两个人唤醒了我）
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English can bring you so much fun.
For example, you can read alot interesting books and make foreign frends, chat with them in english. You can imagine how fun it is !
The most important thing is that you will get a great job if you speak good english.
Don't worry , if u dont know english. Just like me, my english isn’t very good too .
One year ago, I didnt know english at all!
I have been learning english for just one year and u see ? I can write like this! nothing’s impossible!
Sometimes you maybe worry about something.
It's like so many people are learning english, how can I do better than them ?
actually, u don’t have to worry too much.
Some people can’t do something themselves，they want to tell you that you can’t do it either!
Don't care about that
If you think it's worth to do and you love it. just protect it and join me. your dream will come true!
I have to say, there r two people who helped me ,
one gril and my best friend. both of them r important in my life .
Although they r not with me. The girl was a english major student and she changed my life.
Once I know her, I began to study hard.
Because I love her and I could see the sunshine in her face! that was the most happy time in my life.
this happened 1 year ago, I went to crazy about learning english in order to write the first english letter for her on her birth-day.
Finally I made it. But she left me soon after that .
When I was so depressing , my best friend HeMingChao was staying with me all the time.and he turned me on . he live so far away from me , but he gave the most helpful hand.
He has gone to abroad for study long time ago.
Why am I learning english ?because I love english ,and these two people woke me up.
楼主重复的词跟句子太多,,,我基本改了一下..大致不离本意..希望可以帮到你.. :)
For example, you can read alot interesting books and make foreign frends, chat with them in english. You can imagine how fun it is !
The most important thing is that you will get a great job if you speak good english.
Don't worry , if u dont know english. Just like me, my english isn’t very good too .
One year ago, I didnt know english at all!
I have been learning english for just one year and u see ? I can write like this! nothing’s impossible!
Sometimes you maybe worry about something.
It's like so many people are learning english, how can I do better than them ?
actually, u don’t have to worry too much.
Some people can’t do something themselves，they want to tell you that you can’t do it either!
Don't care about that
If you think it's worth to do and you love it. just protect it and join me. your dream will come true!
I have to say, there r two people who helped me ,
one gril and my best friend. both of them r important in my life .
Although they r not with me. The girl was a english major student and she changed my life.
Once I know her, I began to study hard.
Because I love her and I could see the sunshine in her face! that was the most happy time in my life.
this happened 1 year ago, I went to crazy about learning english in order to write the first english letter for her on her birth-day.
Finally I made it. But she left me soon after that .
When I was so depressing , my best friend HeMingChao was staying with me all the time.and he turned me on . he live so far away from me , but he gave the most helpful hand.
He has gone to abroad for study long time ago.
Why am I learning english ?because I love english ,and these two people woke me up.
楼主重复的词跟句子太多,,,我基本改了一下..大致不离本意..希望可以帮到你.. :)
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