Question

麻烦大家帮我翻译下自我介绍

各位评委老师好,我叫…,今年21岁,来自江苏省,很荣幸再次站在这里,去年面试没成功一直很遗憾,又经过一年的学习,我增加了一些知识和经历,今天我会好好的把握这次机会
下面我简单的较少一下自己,我生性开朗,乐观自信,爱好舞蹈,热爱生活,我出生在一个普通而又温馨的家庭,父母每天工作很辛苦,我爱他们,我希望能尽快找到工作,减轻他们的负担,为他们创造一个更优越的生活环境
大韩航空是我可以实现梦想的地方,是我一直不懈的追求，请给我一次机会，我会更加努力，我相信我会成为一名合格的乘务员，谢谢
帮我翻译下，看看有需要修改的吗，拜托各位了，我急用，请大家尽快给我回复，谢谢了
有很好的工作态度和适应能力，我有信心，可以适应这个工作………………

Answer 1

Everyone judges, my name is... From this year, 21, jiangsu, very honored to stand here again, no success last interview has been very regret, and after a year's hard work, I added some knowledge and experience, today I will thoroughly grasp this opportunity
Below I simply by yourself, I less open and bright, optimistic self-confidence, well-educated.like dancing, deeply loves the life, I was born in a common and warmth of family, parents everyday work very hard, I love them, I hope to find a job, reduce the burden of them, for they create a better living environment
Korean air is I can realize our dreams, I've been unremitting pursuit, please give me a chance, I'll work harder, I believe I can become a qualified steward, thank you

Answer 2

You judge a good teacher, my name is ..., 21 years old, from Jiangsu Province, is honored to stand here again, the interview did not work last year has been very sorry, and after another year of study, I added some knowledge and experience, today I will take a good grasp this opportunity
Now I simply less yourself, I very outgoing, optimistic, confident, loving dance, love life, I was born in an ordinary and warm family, the parents work very hard every day, I love them, I hope to find work as soon as possible to alleviate their burden, create a superior living environment
Korean Air is the place where I can dream that I have been relentless pursuit, give me a chance, I will work harder, I believe I will become a qualified crew, thank you

Answer 3

翻译我就不插嘴了 ,不过提个醒，气质，大韩的空姐不一定是最漂亮的 ，但绝对是最有气质的 。而且，需要表现的你的诚意，与长久工作的欲望。
这几点很重要。
不过，大韩空乘没什么好的，现在都在考虑辞职。不是留人的地方。不过可以体验一下。培训完后，全世界都让飞。

Answer 4

哎 建议你别来报这个了 除非你对自己的英语和韩语 还有各种能力 都非常非常的自信 否则即使你过的很辛苦 也坚持不下来