Question

好评，求一篇语言通顺的题目为my day的英语作文

Answer 1

My Day
我的一天
Last Sunday,I had a great time.I went to the countryside with my family.I had never seen such blue sky. The air is fresh and there are lots of beautiful flowers.We had a picnic there,and then we went fishing 、went camping and fle kites.We talked 、played and laughed. All the thing we could see is just happiness.We took a lot of photos to remember the happy day.What a wonderful day!
上周日，我有一个美好的时光。我和我的家人去了乡下。我从来没有见过这样的蓝天。空气是新鲜的，有许多美丽的花。我们在那里野餐，然后我们去钓鱼、去野营，飞风筝。我们谈了、演奏和笑。所有的东西，我们可以看到的只是幸福。我们拍了许多照片，记得快乐的日子。多么美好的一天！

追问

是讲作息的

追答

My day
I get up at seven o'clock , and have breakfast at seven twenty . At half past seven ,I go to school by bus . There are four lessons in the morning . At twelve ,we have lunch .There are two lessons in the afternoon .I go home at four and do my homework at four thirty .At six ,I have dinner with my parents . After dinner ,I often play chess with my father .Sometimes I watch TV .Sometimes I listen to music .At eight thirty , I go to bed .

我的一天
我在早上7点起床，7：20吃早饭，7：30乘公共汽车去上学。我们上午有四节课。12点吃中饭。下午有两节课。我在4点回家，4：30做作业。6点和父母一起吃晚饭。晚饭后，我经常和父亲下棋。有时看电视，有时听音乐。8：30上床睡觉。

可以吗

追问

百度的？

请如实回答

追答

嗯

Answer 2

My Day
　　May first is a Sunday. And it is the Labor’s Day. My mother said to me :“Open your eyes!And look out of the window. What a fine day! Let’s go to park,” So my mother, my classmate and I went to the park. We took some foods in my schoolbag. On the way to the park. I saw the blue sky with snow-white clouds. I saw pear trees and some apple trees and so on. Below the trees, there are several kinds of flowers. It’s colorful, blue, red, yellow, pink, purple, orange and white. I saw some balloons and butterflies in the sky. I ate popcorn, cornflakes, banana and lollipop. They were wonderful.
　　In the afternoon, we went to the zoo. I visited the birds, mice, cats, dogs, budgies, hamsters, rabbits and so on.
　　May Day is my favorite day!

追问

是百度的不要

是将作息的

追答

在百度上问的都是百度的，不可能有人给你写一篇的。

追问

之前问作文，有好几个人都是一个一个字的打

追答

好吧，那真是好人。