第Ⅱ部分五、短文改错(满分10分):假如英语课上老师要求同学们交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作

第Ⅱ部分五、短文改错(满分10分):假如英语课上老师要求同学们交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,要求你在错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词... 第Ⅱ部分五、短文改错(满分10分):假如英语课上老师要求同学们交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,要求你在错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),在其下面写上该加的词。删除:把多余的词用斜线()划掉。修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写上修改后的词。注意:1. 没处错误及其修改均仅限一词。 2.只允许修改10处,多者(从11处起)不记分。Last night when Steven and I was having a walk in the street, we suddenly heard a painful cry for help under a tree nearby. We quickly ran to the tree and found a boy laying on the ground with a stick in his leg. He had fallen of the tree. Steven suggested we pulled the stick out at once, but I disagreed, Because I had learned little about first aid at school. The stick in the leg would help controlling the bleeding. As there was no telephone, we managed to find a taxi. We took the boy to a nearest hospital. The doctors examined the boy fast and we got to know where the boy lived. So we telephoned his parents and left after he came to the hospital. We did a good deed. 展开
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Was改为were   ;  help后加from   ;   laying改为lying   ;  of改为off   ;   pulled改为pull  ;   little 前加a  ;  controlling改为control  ;  a改为the  ;  fast改为quickly  ;   he改为they   

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