Question

英语作文纠错

英语作文：以生活方式为题。
so you see，i'm unhealthy。i don't like vegetables at all.i never exercise.but i want to get good p.e. grades.who can helps me with my health.

my p.e. teache say, we need drink water or milk every day,and eat vegetables at least 4 times a week .it is good for our health.as for sleeping.we must sleep 8 hours every night.exercise is interesting.if we want to be strong,we need exercise every morning.by the way. you can be clever and strong.

Answer 1

so you see，I'm unhealthy。i don't like vegetables at all(, and) i never exercise.But i want to get (a) good p.e. grades.who can helps (不需要S) me with my health ?
My p.e. teache(teacher) say(says,第三人称单数后面的词需要加S), we need(to) drink water or milk every day, and eat vegetables at least 4 times a week .It is good for our health. (Also,)we must sleep 8 hours every night. Exercise is interesting.if we want to be strong,we need (to) exercise every morning.By the way, you can be clever and strong.

Answer 2

有错或需要修改的地方有括号括起来，如下：

(As) you (may) see，I'm unhealthy. I don't like vegetables at all. I never exercise. But I want to get good P.E. grades. Who can (help) me with my health(?)

My P.E. teacher (says), we need drink water or milk every day, and eat vegetables at least 4 times a week. It is good for our health. As for sleeping, we must sleep (at least) 8 hours every night. Exercise is interesting. If we want to be strong, we need exercise every morning. (In) (this) way, we can be clever and (stronger).