Question

这句英语有没有什么错误，如果有，请说一下为什么以及怎么改，谢谢😂😂

这句英语有没有什么错误，如果有，请说一下为什么以及怎么改，谢谢😂😂😂Another success of you is that you were so hard that staied up late every evening.

Answer 1

这是人类写的英文吗？太丢人了。

追问

So?

帮我改改呗。

这样呢→Another success of you is that you studied so hard that staied up late every evening.

追答

Your success is is ascribable to hard work. Everyone knows that you study hard and stay up with your work.

追问

我是想表达:"你的另一个成功是你学习得太努力了以至于每个晚上熬夜到很晚”

追答

我的译文就是这样的，用英语两句话来说的。

追问

这句呢→ The reason why you were successful is that you were the first to arrive at the classroom and the last to leave when you studied in senior high school.

追答

长达三行的句子，你见过哪里的英语这么说的？

追问

可是没有"另一个"的意思?

追答

你这里想用anothe根本就是汉语思维，英语绝不会那样讲，那样写的。

追问

算啦，我重写一篇吧，谢谢~
ps:虽然你说的都是正确，但有些偏激(?)。。。听了有些难过。。。只是有一些，别在意😂😂😂

啊~欠个"的"

这样改呢，可以吗→When you studied in senior high school，you were the first to arrive at the classroom and the last to leave.

这样呢，可以吗→ When you studied in senior high school，you were the first to arrive at the classroom and the last to leave,which was one of your success.And another is that you studied so hard that staied up late every evening.

还在么?

这样呢，可以吗→ When you studied in senior high school，there were a lot of success of you.First，you were the first to arrive at the classroom and the last to leave.Second，you studied so hard that staied up late every evening.

不对，应该是→ When you studied in senior high school，there was a lot of success of you.First，you were the first to arrive at the classroom and the last to leave.Second，you studied so hard that staied up late every evening.

what’s more，you always overcame every difficulties and never gave up.

另起一段→All in all，I want to give my sincere thanks to you，who always tried again and again.