Question

帮我看看翻译的对吗，哪不对帮我修改修改

and i love you so 我是如此爱你
the people ask me how
how i've lived till now
有人问我怎么活到现在
i tell them i don't know 我说我不知道
i guess they understand
how lonely life has been
我想他们知道生活曾经多少孤独
but life began again 但是生活又重新开始了
the day you took my hand 那天你拉着我的手
and yes i know how lonely(loveless)life van be
the shadows follow me
是的,我知道只有影子相伴的生活是多么孤独
and the night won't set me free
但是那晚并没有使我解脱
but i don't let the evening get(bring)me down
但是我不会让夜晚把我打跨
now that you're around me 既然你在我身边
and you love me too 我也如此爱你
your thoughts are just for me 你只为我考虑
you set my sporot free 你也让我的精神解脱
i'm happy that you do 我很高兴你所做的一切
the book of life is brief 生活之书很简单
and once a page is read
all but love is dead 一旦读过一页,爱就逝去了
that is my belief 这就是我的信念
and i love you so
the people ask me how
how i've lived till now
i tell them i don't know同上

Answer 1

翻译的不错：）
下面是几处理解不一样的地方；

how lonely life has been
我想他们知道生活一直以来多么的孤独
and you love me too 你也爱我
your thoughts are just for me 你一切都为我考虑
you set my sporot free 你解脱了我的灵魂
i'm happy that you do 我很高兴你这么做了
all but love is dead 除了爱情都会死去
that is my belief 这就是我的信念

Answer 2

翻译的挺好的我觉得。可以更诗意一些吧。我也喜欢这首歌的歌词哦。

Answer 3

很不错.没有什么错的.