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1. It is reported that more and more Olympic champions entering university before Olympic.
2. It is unfair for other student
3. My reason are as follows.
4. My reason is simple, but most people also hold this idea.
5. More and more champions’ going to a university make many people feel unfair.
6. It is said that the women who are capable had given her company a fake diploma.
7. the company have fired her because of lack of honesty.
8. I hold the oppsite idea
9. we should put value on honest beyond all things.
10. champions admitted to the college as exceptions has become more and more popular among the schools.
11. Although she is capable, but honesty is the first consideration.
12. some people hold the opinion that they are ought to.
13. after the olympic
14. honesty and have good ability are both important.
15. in my opinion that the company was correct.
16. I think hire a dishonest person could lose more in the future.
17. a people of
18. a staff was be fired
19. I hold the opinion that they are admitted to colleges are reasonable.
20. as far as I am concerned that she is a capable worker, but she isn’t honest.
21. it is said that a person into the company with a fake certificate.
22. the honesty is important.
23. As we all know, honesty is one of the most important characters for us. If you lost honesty, you will not be worth believing in. No matter how well you have done in your job, in my opinion, you will be fired by boss because of lacking of honesty.
24. In my eyes, I hold the opinion that everybody are equal, no one is special.
25. people’s view on the champions are admitted to colleges as expections vary from person to person.
26. but whether they will have privilege I think that is wrong.
27. it is important for everyone to should be honest.
28. as far as I am concerned, many people do like this.
29. it is said that there were some people use fake diploma to work.
30. although the young woman fake the diploma, but she is competent to do this work, why not give her another chance?
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Answer 1

1. It is reported that more and more Olympic champions enter university before Olympic.
2. It is unfair to other student
3. The reasons are as follows.
4. My reason is simple,and most people also hold this idea.
5. More and more champions’ going to a university makes many people feel unfair.
6. It is said that the women who are capable gave her company a fake diploma.
7. the company fired her because she lacked honesty.
8. I hold the opposite idea
9. we should put value on honesty beyond all things.
10. champion's being admitted to the college as exceptions has become more and more popular among the schools.
11. Although she is capable, honesty is the first consideration.
12. some people hold the opinion that they ought to.
13. after the olympics
14. honesty and having good ability are both important.
15. in my opinion，the company was correct.
16. I think hire a dishonest person will lose more in the future.
17. people of
18. a staff was fired
19. I hold the opinion that their being admitted to colleges are reasonable.
20. as far as I am concerned ,she is a capable worker, but not honest.
21. it is said that a person joins the company with a fake certificate.
22. honesty is important.
23. As we all know, honesty is one of the most important characters of us. If you lose honesty, you will not be worth believing in. No matter how well you have done in your job, in my opinion, you will be fired by boss because of lacking honesty.
24. In my eyes,everybody is equal, no one is special.
25. people’s view on the champions being admitted to colleges as expections varies from person to person.
26. but I think it is wrong whether they will have privilege .
27. it is important for everyone to be honest.
28. as far as I concern, many people do like this.
29. it is said that there are some people using fake diploma to work.
30. although the young woman fake the diploma,she is competent to do this work, why not give her another chance?

Answer 2

1.在entering前加are
2.for-->to,student--->students
3.reason-->reasons
4.,-->. but-->But。但改为Although my reason is simple, most people hold it.或My reason is simple,but hold by most people更 好。
5.去掉a，make-->makes
6.had-->have
7.have-->had/has
8.opposite
9.value of honesty
10.being admitted,去掉第一个the
11. 去掉but
12. 去掉are
13.olympic-->Olympic
14.have-->having
15.that-->,
16.hire-->hiring
17.什么意思？
18.去掉be
19.原句-->I hold the opinion that their being admitted to college is reasonable.
20.that-->,
21.into前加goes
22.-->Honesty is important.
23.lacking of-->lack of 此处lack为名词
24.去掉in my eyes（与I hold the opinion重复），are-->is
25.are-->being,vary-->varies
26.去掉but
27.去掉should
28.
29.-->it is said that there are some people using fake diploma to work.
30.去掉but，第二个，改为.

Answer 3

1.在entering前加are
2.for-->to,student--->students
3.reason-->reasons
4.,-->. but-->But。但改为Although my reason is simple, most people hold it.或My reason is simple,but hold by most people更 好。
5.去掉a，make-->makes
6.had-->have
7.have-->had/has
8.opposite
9.value of honesty
10.being admitted,去掉第一个the
11. 去掉but
12. 去掉are
13.olympic-->Olympic
14.have-->having
15.that-->,
16.hire-->hiring
17.什么意思？
18.去掉be
19.原句-->I hold the opinion that their being admitted to college is reasonable.
20.that-->,
21.into前加goes
22.-->Honesty is important.
23.lacking of-->lack of 此处lack为名词
24.去掉in my eyes（与I hold the opinion重复），are-->is
25.are-->being,vary-->varies
26.去掉but
27.去掉should
28.
29.-->it is said that there are some people using fake diploma to work.
30.去掉but，，改为.