Question

英语作文：一天的生活

Answer 1

A Typical Day in My Life
　　My alarm clock rings at 6 o'clock every morning and I usually get up at once.Exercising for about ten minutes,I comb my hair,wash my face,eat my breakfast,and leave for school.
　　Generally,I go to school by bus.The bus is always crowded.In the bus,I look at the signs through the windows,watch the passengers,and even read the newspaper head lines over someone's shoulder.It takes me about half an hour to get to school.
　　My first class begins at eight o'clock and my last class ends at five.After school hours,I sometimes go to the Students Center or to the library for an hour or so.Afterwards,I go home.
　　As soon as I get home,I sit down,do my homework and study my lessons for the next day.At 7 o'clock,we eat dinner.Then I relax,watch TV,take a walk,or visit a friend.
　　At about 10 o'clock I get into bed and fall asleep immediately.I sleep until the alarm clock goes off again the next morning.
　　If you need anything,don't hesitate to ask.
　　「评语」
　　本文完全按照时间的顺序,描写一天的生活.线索清晰,结构也很分明,读后使人一目了然.不足之处是句式比较单一,缺少变化.