Question

求大神短文改错！

When i was a little child ,i loved doing things for others . Now i still remembered one afternoon ten years's ago when i made a card by hands . I just wanted to find someone in the nearby and hand them to him. Therefore, when i was there,i didn't know who give the card to .After all , i was too nervously. I was about to leave the shop while an old lady ran into me . It was an accident and she apologized a million at times ! We both smiled and walked away.Suddenly i realized she was the one and ran over to her and handed a card, wish her a happy life.

Answer 1

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When i was a little child ,i loved doing things for others . Now i still remembered( remembered - remember ) one afternoon ten years's( years's - years ) ago when i made a card by hands( hands- hand) . I just wanted to find someone in the nearby and hand them ( them - it )to him. Therefore(Therefore - However), when i was there,i didn't know who(加上to) give the card to .After all , i was too nervously( nervously - nervous). I was about to leave the shop while (while - when )an old lady ran into me . It was an accident and she apologized a million at ( at去掉 )times ! We both smiled and walked away.Suddenly i realized she was the one and ran over to her and handed a card, wish( wish - wishing) her a happy life

Answer 2

When i was a little child, i loved making things and giving them to strangers.

Now i still remember that i made a card by hand in one afternoon ten years ago. Then I wanted to find someone nearby and gave it to him.

However, when i was there, i didn't know who i should give the card to. Because i was too nervous.

I was about to leave while an old lady ran into me. It was an accident and she apologized several times!

We both smiled and walked away. Suddenly i realized that she was the one who i should give the card to. then i ran ofter to her and gave the card to her, wish her a happy life.

希望帮到你。

Answer 3

在考试吗？

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不是。我做了一下感觉很模糊