Question

一篇英语短剧3到5分钟左右

剧情大概为：两个抢劫犯到街上抢劫两位路人，却被两位路人说的话感动了，去警察局自首了。
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Answer 1

Daylight, an old car pulls over at the roadside.
Inside the car, Robber A in a mask holding a pistol turns to Robber B also in mask, who takes out a dagger beneath his seat.
Robber A:
Look.
Robber B:
Two girls.
Robber A:
Let’s do it.
Robber B:
Ok.
The robbers point weapons at the passersby.
Robber A:
Don’t move! Otherwise I’ll kill you.
Robber B:
May you please hand over all the money in your possession and your mobile phones?
Passerby A:
You'll never get our money and phones.
Passerby B:
They don’t belong to you.
The robbers assault the passersby and snatch their briefcases and mobile phones.
Robber A:
Damn, I can’t open the briefcases.
Robber B:
My god, the warning messages appear on the phones.
Passerby A:
They're the products we've developed to help people protect their valuable items
from street robbery.
Passerby B:
Anyone opening the briefcase must be fingerprinted by a built-in scanner.
The fingerprints're transmitted to a wireless network for comparison with a database of
the owner as well as known criminals.
A tracking application's installed on our phones in case they get stolen.
Passerby A:
We're community volunteers working closely with the local authority and police to launch
a campaign against street robbery. There're watchful eyes throughout the town.
Passerby B:
We collect donations for the orphans who've lost their parents in street robbery.
The children feel very lonely and scared. They often gaze at their family photos.
From time to time they're roused during sleep and shout for help.
Silence for several minutes.
The robbers burst into tears and kneel down surrendering their gun and knife. Then they go to the nearby police station.

追问

求中文翻译，谢谢

追答

光天化日之下，一辆旧车停在路边。车内劫匪A蒙面，持手枪，劫匪B也蒙面，从座位下取出一把匕首。劫匪A转身与劫匪B对话。
劫匪A：
你看。
劫匪B：
俩年轻女子。
劫匪A：
我们动手吧。
劫匪B：
好。
劫匪用凶器指着路人。
劫匪A：
不许动，动就打死你们！
劫匪B：
交出你们身上带的钱和手机。
路人A：
你们永远不能得逞。
路人B：
这些东西不属于你们。
劫匪殴打两位路人，抢夺她们的公文包和手机。
劫匪A：
该死，我打不开这个公文包。
劫匪B：
天哪，手机显示警告信息。
路人A：
那都是我们开发的产品，用来帮助人们保护贵重财物，免遭街头抢劫。
路人B：
如果有人要打开公文包，须经内置扫描仪录入指纹，指纹随即被发送到无线网络，与数据库的物主指纹以及在案的罪犯指纹进行对比。
我们的手机都安装了跟踪应用软件，以防被盗。
路人A：
我们是社区志愿者，与地方当局和警察密切配合，开展一项打击街头抢劫的行动。现在全城到处都是警惕的眼睛。
路人B：
我们还为孤儿募捐，他们因遇街头抢劫而丧失父母。孩子们感到极度孤单和恐惧，常常凝视着家人照片，一次又一次从睡梦中惊醒，呼喊救命。
沉默几分钟后，劫匪突然大哭起来，跪倒在地，交出刀枪，然后向附近警察局走去。

另外两处英文修改,供参考：
1. 修改前: The robbers assault the passersby and snatch their briefcases and mobile
phones.
修改后: The robbers beat up the passersby and snatch their briefcases andmobile
phones.
2. 修改前: The children feel very lonely and scared.
修改后: The children feel extremely lonely and scared.