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英语翻译错误检查

来个英语大神帮忙看下下面这两段哪里有问题呗。谢谢大神了。
The reason why the workload of the paper's review is increased is becauseour country to popularize higher education and the college graduates rises yearby year. However, internet-based application technology provides a new solutionto the traditional management of teaching.
Graduation paper online reviews system, which is designed by the frameworkof the struts and hibernate, using the MVC design idea of system development.It uses the MySQL to manage the backstage system and MyEclipse to develop theWeb. It is important that to explore an internet-based graduation paper scoremodel to change the manual review of graduation paper of the traditional model.With this new model, not only can we make full of the network of campus, butalso improve the speed and efficiency of the graduation paper review. So thatteachers and students can communicate, work and access online in real-time.

Answer 1

1.1

The reason why the workload of the paper's review is increased is becauseour country to popularize higher education and the college graduates rises yearby year. [修改]

• [教师点评]  
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• [词语错误] 请检查becauseour，确认拼写正确。   好评 报错  
• [搭配错误] 搭配 graduate rise 在语料库中无此用法，疑似中式英语。   好评 报错  
• [高分表达] the reason why 意为：...的原因是...，属于四六级经典高分句型。   The reason why we have to grow trees is that they can supply fresh air for us.
  我们必须种树的原因是它们能供应我们新鲜的空气。  好评 报错  
• [批改提示] country表示“国家”。注意与state的区别。详情点击   好评 报错  
• [批改提示] rise表示“上升，增长，站起来”。注意与arise的区别。详情点击   好评 报错  

1.2 However, internet-based application technology provides a new solutionto the traditional management of teaching. [修改]

• [教师点评]  
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• [词语错误] 请检查solutionto，确认拼写正确。   好评 报错  
• [搭配学习] 动名搭配 provide...management 在教材中出现过 96 次   SeeAlso: provide direction²²⁶,leave management⁹⁸,allow management²⁸,offer management²⁵,supply management⁶ 好评 报错  
• [批改提示] technology表示“工艺，技术”。注意与technique的区别。详情点击   好评 报错  

1.3 Graduation paper online reviews system, which is designed by the frameworkof the struts and hibernate, using the MVC design idea of system development. [修改]

• [教师点评]  
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• [词语错误] 请检查frameworkof，确认拼写正确。   好评 报错  
• [句子错误] 请检查hibernate，确认主谓一致。   好评 报错  
• [搭配学习] 动名搭配 use...idea 在教材中出现过 244 次   SeeAlso: use estimate²²⁹,apply idea⁸⁵,use thought²¹,practice idea⁴ 好评 报错  

1.4 It uses the MySQL to manage the backstage system and MyEclipse to develop theWeb. [修改]

• [教师点评]  
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• [词语错误] 请检查theWeb，确认拼写正确。   好评 报错  
• [搭配学习] 动名搭配 manage...system 在教材中出现过 378 次   SeeAlso: oversee system³⁰⁶,do system¹¹⁷,handle system⁹⁷,manage organization⁸³,care system²²,supervise system²⁰,deal system⁷,manage arrangement⁵ 好评 报错  

1.5 It is important that to explore an internet-based graduation paper scoremodel to change the manual review of graduation paper of the traditional model. [修改]

• [教师点评]  
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• [词语错误] 请检查scoremodel，确认拼写正确。   好评 报错  

1.6 With this new model, not only can we make full of the network of campus, butalso improve the speed and efficiency of the graduation paper review. [修改]

• [教师点评]  
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• [词语错误] 请检查butalso，确认拼写正确。   好评 报错  

1.7 So thatteachers and students can communicate, work and access online in real-time. [修改]

• [教师点评]  
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• [词语错误] 请检查thatteachers，确认拼写正确。  

Answer 2

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Answer 3

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