Question

把我给出的英语作文帮我改编一下。急！！！急求！！ 请快点！！！今晚之前一定要！！！

Water Cycle.
Water starts in its liquid form, which is water as everyone known already. When water in lakes, oceans is heated up it turns into water vapours. Water vapours cool down and form clouds in the sky. Clouds has too many vapours in it and cannot hold any more, it rains. The water goes back into lakes and oceans when it rains. And the water is ready for another travel

帮我把有些句子缩短有些变长 不要换一篇 就这篇 尽量的修改一下下 拜托拜托 得快点 急求 ！！

Answer 1

Water Cycle.
Water starts in its liquid form, as everyone has known. When water is in lakes, oceans is heated up and it turns into water vapours. Water vapours cool down and form clouds in the sky. When clouds has too many vapours in it and cannot hold any more,it begins rainning. The water goes back into lakes and oceans when it rains. And the water is ready for another travel.