请英文高手进来帮我纠正语法错误,我知道很多,但是拜托你们了。

Secondly,itisusuallyfeellonelyifparentsarenotathomeandlittlebylittle,itmightcausesome... Secondly, it is usually feel lonely if parents are not at home and little by little, it might cause some mental problems on children, so I prefer children to meet more friends, on one hand, children can get rid of the lonely situation by communicating with their friends, on the other hand friends can take the place of parents to some extent, friends can always give you an encouragement when you feel down, remind you not to do stupid things, the most important thing is that they can always accompany with you, talk to you which might lead you always stay in a positive mood, lastly, Extend some more hobbies are also a good way to try, children can have the joy of playing sports or from something else, at the same time, it might lead them to feel fulfilled of their life, therefore it might have a good influence on childcare. 展开
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Secondly, children usually feel lonely when parents are not at home. Day by day, it might cause some mental problems and I suggest that children should meet more friends. On one hand, children can get rid of feeling lonely by communicating with their friends. On the other hand, friends can take the place of parents to some extent. A person’s friends can always give him an encouragement when he feel upset and keep him away from irrational actions. The most important thing is that a person’s friends can always be with the person and talk to the person to guide him into a positive mood. Lastly, having more hobbies is also worthy trying. Children can have fun in playing sports or some other creative activities. Moreover, hobbies can lead children to feel fulfilled about their life. Therefore, it might have some good influences on children.

我通篇改了,错误就不一一说了,最后一句的“it”我不明白指代什么
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which might lead you to positive mood . Lastly ...

Overall is OK except those !!

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Secondly, it is usually feel lonely if parents are not at home and little by little, it might cause some mental problems on children, so I prefer children to meet more friends, on one hand, children can get rid of the lonely situation by communicating with their friends, on the other hand friends can take the place of parents to some extent, friends can always give you an encouragement when you feel down, remind you not to do stupid things, the most important thing is that they can always accompany with you, talk to you which might lead you always stay in a positive mood, lastly, Extend some more hobbies are also a good way to try, children can have the joy of playing sports or from something else, at the same time, it might lead them to feel fulfilled of their life, therefore it might have a good influence on childcare.
s是什么意思啊? 我也想知道啊?
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