Question

短文改错英语

(五)

In recent years, there have been some cities in China choose September the 22nd as their No Car Day, aiming to encourage people to choose environment-friendly means of transportation, such as bus, bike, instead driving cars.

This activity had won the support of people from many countries and strengthened people’s awareness for energy conservation and environmental protection.

With the improvement of people’s living standards, more and more family can afford one or more private cars, resulting in heavier traffic problems or more serious air pollution. So, it is necessary and urgency to have No Car Day to remind people to the importance of environmentalprotection. Hopeful, more cities and more people will take the part in this activity to make our earth cleaner.

(六)

There is a Chinese saying going like this: Traveling ten thousand li was better to reading ten thousand books. Indeed, travel benefits us a lot. Firstly, travel broadens our mind and enriches to our knowledge. We can experience more about the inside world by traveling.

Secondly, we feel more relaxing when traveling, which is good to our body and health. Naturally, we will become more energetic before a pleasant travel.

In addition, we are more likely to make new friend on our journey. To sum up, travel is really good for us. If possibly, I hope I can travel around world in my lifetime.

Answer 1

根据错误顺序
五
1 第一个choose~choosing
2 instead后面加of
3 had~has
4 aware for~aware of
5 family~families
6 problems后面的or改成and
7 urgency~urgent
8 people后面的to改成of
9 Hopeful~Hopefully
10 去掉take后面的the
六
1 was~is
2 better后面的to改成than
3 enriches后面的to去掉
4 inside~outside
5 relaxing~relaxed
6 before~after
7 friend~friends
8 possibly~possible
9 world前面加the