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Ihave10yearsworkexperienceinsalesandatleast8yearsexperienceinamanagerialpositioninafa... I have 10 years work experience in sales and at least 8 years experience in a managerial position in a fast-paced growth environment. I deeply understand the Chinese market and realities. I have full of experience in marketing�sales�distributor manager, and have strong leadership capabilities, able to manage a large sales team. I have strong work responsibility and can travel frequently. 展开
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I have work experience of 10 years in sales and experience of at least 8 years in a managerial position in a fast-paced growing environment. I understand the Chinese market and realities deeply and extensively. I also have full experience as a manager in marketing, sales and distribution, have strong leadership capabilities, and I am able to manage a large sales team. I have strong work responsibilities and can be flexible to travel frequently.
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In this growing environment, I have 10 years of work experience in Sales and at least 8 years in Managerial position. I deeply understand the realities of Chinese Market and with full experience as a Marketing, Sales & Distributor Manager. Further more, I have capabilities of being a strong leader with the skill to manage a large sales team. Apart from that, I do have a strong working responsibility towards my work and I can travel frequently.

Wow .. Vienna franz ..
You are gonna to have interview ? Aren't you .. so which means that you are in a high level position . Anyway ...wish you able to get your job without any trouble.Good Luck !
Cheers,
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I deeply understand the Chinese market and realities.改deeply为 fully,deeply是中文的说法,英语不这样讲

I have full of experience in marketing
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I have a strong background ...,这里full是形容词后面不接of,可以说a strong background as manager of marketing, sales and distribution.

听起来都是中式的英语,感觉是从中文翻译成英语的

I am flexible to a frequent travel schedule.
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I have 10 years of work experiences in sales and at least 8 years of experiences in a managerial position in a fast-paced growing environment. I deeply understand the Chinese markets and realities. I have full of experiences in marketing�sales�as a distributor manager, and have high leadership capabilities, am able to manage a large sales team. I have high work responsibility and can travel frequently.
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10 years old
10-year-old

at least 8 years
at-least-8-year

able to manage
be able to manage

I have strong
I hava a strong
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