Question

写一篇 英语小段文 在线等1！！~~急急急！！~~~200分，高出分。急急急！！

http://www.pep.com.cn/ce/czyy/jnj/dzkb/200703/t20070315_346044.htm
看3c，写小段文（并翻译）
就是用第一人称 写写以前，（性格， 爱好 ， 学习，高矮，兴趣......等），再写写现在。
用上used to .....now........就好了，200分 有那麽难吗？？
记着翻译！！

Answer 1

三楼 机器翻译的东西还能看么？语法错误一堆！你这是误人子弟懂么？我宁愿花20分钟帮Lz写一篇范文，也不会干这种更缺德的事

至少我的范文能规范Lz的写作的句式和用词，让LZ还能学到点英语知识，你的翻译机除了能让Lz交差之外，还有作用么？

首先需要说明一点的是

我不知道Lz的英语水平是怎样，但我猜，对一个普通的初中生而言，我写的这篇范文可能生词比较多，所以Lz如果不认识的单词比较多，请查字典弄懂，再对照我的译文仔细研究下

至少不能让你的英语老师问你时 你自己单词看不懂穿帮

In terms of my primary school life,I'd like to describe that it really impress me constantly,and I believe I will remember this precious schooling time during my life.

It is evident that I have changed a lot as time goes by,especially when I come to the primary school,first and most foremost,I have recognised the responsibility which I have to carry out,not only in the studying,but also in the every aspects of my life.secondly,I also make some friends and get well on with them,which makes me feel relaxed and no pressure when I hang out with them.

By contrast,I still remembered that when I was a young kid before entering the primary school,I didn't care about others,no mention to know made teamwork with my peers and helped with each other.

All in all,I have to appreciate my primay school life,It teaches me a lot of things,and I will do my best to be an excellent student during this schooling life.

附翻译

说起我的中学生活，我想说它持续影响着我，并且我觉得我会在我的有生之年一直记住这段宝贵的求学生涯

很明显，随着时间的流逝，我改变了很多，特别是当我进入中学之后。首先最重要的一点，我认识到我需要肩负的责任不仅仅是学习，还有生活的各个方面吧，第二点，我交了几个知心好友并且和他们相处的很好，这让我和他们一起玩的时候觉得很放松，没有压力。

相对而言，我依然记得当我还是一个没有上中学的小屁孩时，我不会关心别人，更别提我还懂得团队合作或者互相帮助我的小伙伴。

总之，我必须感谢我的中学生活，它教会了我很多事情，我将会尽我最大的努力做我所在初中的一名优秀的学生

有些词组和句型 实在不懂再hi我

Answer 2

My life has changed a lot since primary school.I used to like reading story books but now I like reading comics.I used to like pop music but now I like classic music.I used to swim but I don't.I like running instead.I used to eat meat but now I enjoy fruit and vegetables.In the past my favourite subject was maths,but now English is my favourite.Besides,my favourite thing was stamps,but I like coins.

小学以来，我的生活变化很大。以前我喜欢看故事书，现在喜欢看漫画；以前我喜爱流行音乐，可现在我喜欢古典音乐；我以前喜欢游泳，现在不喜欢了，现在喜欢跑步；以前我总是吃肉，现在喜欢水果和蔬菜；以前我最喜爱数学，可现在最喜爱英语；另外，过去我最爱邮票，现在爱硬币了。

（现在才看到你的问题，希望能帮到你）

Answer 3

朋友,我在做任务,如果回答对你有帮助，麻烦给个最佳答案鼓励一下，谢谢!
以下绝对原创，因为不了解你的其他信息，只能按大众化写，花了我四十多分钟。
During my grade school, I usually do not study hard, like to play with my friends. I am short and a little lazy; I don’t understand my parents tire, if I need a plaything and mother don’t agree to buy for me. I certainly cry loudly.
Now I am a primary school student, I know a lot of thing, including study hard, finish my homework on time. of course I grow up and know my parents and love my parents deeply. I can’t cry loudly because of a plaything, but I maybe cry because of making a mistake, a bad hard etc.
In general I will try my best to study hard from now on and will become a college student in future.
在我小学期间，我经常不努力学习，喜欢和朋友们玩耍。那时候，我个子有点矮，而且有点懒。同时也不理解体谅父母的劳累，如果我想要一个玩具，妈妈不同意买，我就会号啕大哭。

现在我已经是个初中生了，懂得了很多事情，包括努力学习、按时完成作业，当然我也长大了，也理解父母，而且深爱着他们.我更不会因为一个玩具再哭，但是我可能会因为自己犯错、不努力等等而哭泣。

总之，我将从现在开始尽全力努力学习，争取考上大学。

顺便说明一下，楼上的太难了，根据不是初中生能具备的水平，此外这样给楼主增加了很多困难。望楼主明鉴。有问题及时hi我。

Answer 4

It is evident that I have changed a lot as time goes by,especially when I come to the primary school,first and most foremost,I have recognised the responsibility which I have to carry out,not only in the studying,but also in the every aspects of my life.secondly,I also make some friends and get well on with them,which makes me feel relaxed and no pressure when I hang out with them.

Answer 5

How my life has changed since primary school
My life has changed a lot in the last few years. My daily life is different and I used to like different things when I was a child. I remember I used to be a funny girl. I always made my classmates laugh.Then I began to laugh with them together. I used to have long,brack hair. I really loved it. So I hated anyone to cut it. But one day, my mother took me to a barber’s shop. The barber cut my long hair. I cried for a long time. Then my mother gave me some money. Now I have a little short hair. but it is straight. And I don't hate cutting my hair. Now my favorite subject is math and science. My biggest change is my life. I used to live with my parents. I didn't like living alone . Now I live with my classmates. But I am still afraid of the dark.
翻译：我的生活已经改变了过去几年很多。我每天的生活都不一样，过去当我还是个孩子我喜欢的不同的东西。我记得我曾经是一个有趣的女孩。我总是让我的同学开心.从那时起我开始与他们一起欢笑。我曾经有过长长的黑发。我真的很喜欢它。所以，我讨厌剪发。但是有一天，妈妈带我去一家理发店。理发师把我的长头发剪了。我哭了很久。然后，我的母亲给了我一些钱。现在我有一个小短发。但它是直的。而且我不恨我把头发剪短。现在我最喜欢的科目是数学和自然科学。我最大的变化是我的生活。我用我的父母住在一起。我不喜欢独自一人。现在我和同学住在一起，但我仍然害怕黑暗。

Answer 6

emmm,your fenshu is too down ,i not happy to help you.